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The house was taking a toll on people living there that they had to move out of the house. They were so flabbergasted at how easily the house was destroyed. People who perceived the house were not so happy about the house that they had an aversion on the because it must have been deteriorated for years. Visitors were skeptical about how the house got so damaged that they wondered what kind of colossal creature it was that did this.
ReplyDeleteGood use of a lot of different vocabulary words.
DeleteThe house queens blvd deteriorated on monday, the man next door named jeff was skeptical when witnesses say the the house had caught on fire randomly out of no where. A year later they contributed to rebuild it since it was a enduring house. The people who lived in it as if it was its priority
ReplyDeleteI was flabbergasted when I saw one of my classmate's house it was totally had changed since the last time I came. Her mom told me that hurricane sandy had taken toll of the engrave house and they are short on budget cause the father passed away. So our class decided to contribute to the engraved house and try to help the poor family with the money we were supposed to go on a field trip. But now our class decide to support the family, some of the kids whine about not going to the felid trip but my teacher said we are reading the book Wonder, and we have to show empathy so let help the family, and our principal Ms. Amman also agree to our suggestion.
ReplyDeleteTWO WEEKS LATER-
We found a apartment that was nice and comfy (came with furnitures) also what the money that our class contributed with the money that the family can give. Some of the classmates went inside the house to find any thing that is preserved from the hurricane and 2 hours later they found a jewelry box well preserved and it looked durable, it was actually passed down from many generations ago.
Good use of vocabulary.
DeleteThe house was consumed down by an zombie invasion and 4 left surviving in the house with weapons such as assault rifles and melee weapons to defend them selfs. 2 people who were one of the 4 survivors considered staying inside the deteriorated house. One of he survivors was skeptical when one of the survivors said that they can survive the zombie invasion and leave the place but 3 of the survivors didn't believe him. The 3 survivors felt despair. Surviving the zombie invasion was the top priority for the left 4 survivors.
ReplyDeleteI like the way you detailed your story but yo have less than five vocabulary words.
DeleteIn a dark scary house. Where only one who lives their. He is a science nerd. He thought it was his destiny to make a monster. So he did...
ReplyDeleteHe preserved all of his power for the day he would contribute his energy to his monster. He wanted his monster to be durable, colossal, and grand. He achieved this by making his monster his only priority. The science berd and his monster both had to endure a lot of pain. The machine made the house start to deteriorate.
Everyone who new the science nerd before he made the monster were skeptical. Now these people are applying the same amount of effort the science nerd used when he made his monster.
80 Years Later
The monster saw his master dying. The monster couldn't bare to see him like that so he found a way to consume his power and put it into his master. The monster passed away while the master died a few days later.
Once there was a house, This house was a big priority for Mickey mouse and the clubhouse #1 and #2. The house was very deteriorated. the difference between was #1 was the good/original mickey and clubhouse. #2 was the evil version of mickey and clubhouse. They could not tell the difference between each of them, it was very opaque. Though they both were great actors.
ReplyDelete"Why are we here?" said Minnie mouse #1. "We are here to save each of us." said mickey mouse #2. Minnie thought in her head this wasn't the real mickey. She kept that idea and just went along with "the evil clone."
Both groups found each other they both fight to get what they wanted, Their proirity to keep the house for one group who must it be
Minnie later found the real mickey they both hugged and loved seeing each other after a long journey. #2 clubhouse was very degraded they could have hardly moved. But #1 were so endurance they celebrated
1 years later
The president of mickeycity later agreed to make this a day of honor. they fought in the right side and gained power. But the president was a villain to working for #2 clubhouse
Had they really escaped?
I love this!!!!!
DeleteNice Job Nicole!
DeleteCory and Frisk fell through the mountains peak because the dirt below couldn't endure their weight at once."Are you alright Frisk?" Asked Cory.
ReplyDeleteAt first they were skeptical about adventuring the unknown after they fell on a pit of yell flowers.
Even though they were skeptical its they're only way to go. they met Flowey the Flower. "IN THIS WORLD ITS KILL OR BE KILLED! WHO WOULD EVER PASS AN OPPORTUNITY TO KILL YOU?" screamed flowey look viciously at them. Both of their health degraded. but then a fire shot the murderous flowey.
"What poor miserable thing, torturing such poor innocent youth." said the mysterious goat women "Do not worry my child, i am TORIEL caretaker of the Ruins."
as they walked they noticed a deteriorated pillar which Toriel was behind. Then it was Cory's Priority to get out of the Underground and to the Surface! They came to Muffets Bake sell in the Ruins! all they had was Spider Donuts and Spider Cider and Cory saw a sign that said
"MADE WITH 100% REAL SPIDER!" and then heard frisk say "Hey Cory! I think we should contribute to Muffet!"
But then it came a time when Cory found a useful toy knife and Toriel gave them a place to LIVE. Cory then though he cant live there and then had to fight Toriel for his advance to get-out of the underground. As he pulled out the knife he whispered
"Sorry." As he said Frisk came and said "NO! Cory what are you doing!?" "Im fighting to get back to the surface!" shouted Cory and Frisk responded back with "But you dont need to fight!" then Toriel let them go to the rest of the underground alone.
It’s a rainy day Jo and Amy brought a house that hey never know that there was a ghost in there. But it was degrade so easy to break down because it was broken Jo and Amy live in one room.”I think we should move” said Jo “yeah but where will we live said Amy “I’m getting hungry”said Amy” “I’ll get the food” said Jo. While when Jo was getting the food a ghost appeared and try to tell Jo that”you can’t from me”said the ghost Jo slapped himself and where the ghost was standing the ghost was gone.Jo was freacking out what to tell Amy that there is a ghost but Amy does not beleve in ghot and then she will be mad at me because of me saying that “but I need to tell about this she might even get hurt” said Jo so he went upstair. When Jo got up to the room Amy said “did it take you that long just to get the food?” “ummm no but you have to listen to me there is a ghost we need to move out right now” said Jo “yeah stop being skeptical there is something we now called there no gho-” just when Amy was about to finish her line Jo and Amy heard a noise like if someone is in the corner.” Now let’s move before someone can get Contribute here”said Jo “fine but only once ok”sad Amy. The house was Endure ever since that time but still Deteriorate .
ReplyDeleteOnce upon a time there was a very happy and a good guild that protects the town.They always had fun no matter what the people in the guild that were going on mission was Nastu,Happy,Laxus and Zeref. To collect the scroll of Town of Warriors. Nastu at first was skeptical that this mission was really easy. This was his Priority to finish this mission as fast as possible so he would get a reward while all happy was thinking about was fish since he is a special cat with wings also called as "Exceed".They then stopped in a town called Town of Warriors The team was thinking about a plan at first Happy didnt care then he started to contribute to the team They then started to head off finding the Scroll when They ended up in a forest with Dark Trees and a house it was a haunted scary looking old house Nastu says"It looks like it is all deteriorated by fire "impossible"Nastu said hey why this town was said "to endure for more then 100 years!!!!"10 minutes later
ReplyDeleteNastu said why dont we go and explore it alittle "Okay" Zeref said why don't we Laxus said "If U want" "Here we go" Happy said And in they went looking around was already giving them the creeps but going in deeper was more scary "Oh?" Nastu said The house was all dark and no end to it" It was like a illusion Then nastu found something shiny he went and grabbed it "Hayah" He grabbed it everthing started to move and rumble dark clouds of lightning and darkeness all creature from the darkness came and boom. AHHHHHHHHHH!!!! RUNNNNNNNN Happy said they rran without stopping at all then they stopped when they realized they were back at there guild well it was suppose to be here .... Nastu said "What is happening"?.......
One day, a man named Mr.Poophardt lived in a faraway land in Bali, Indonesia with his beautiful wife and wonderful children. The family had to live in a deteriorated house because Donald Trump told them too. Though the house looked very old and degraded, it endured for a very long time. After living in the house for thousands of years...(that's how old Mr.Poophardt is)...he realized it was his priority to make some money for a new house, and a job to become a boring science teacher. Mr.Poophardt started off easy by working as a chef in a restaurant. Though it was rusty for him since he stank at cooking, his wife was such an amazing cook! When he got enough money to get a nice house and to be a boring science teacher, he quit his job as a chef, and was nice enough to make a contribution with the rest of his money to Mr.Pewhirst! They all lived sadly ever after......AMEN!
ReplyDeleteYAYYYYYYY I LOVE THIS!!!!!!!
DeleteWoW
DeleteLOL Kyra!
DeleteLol Mr.Poophardt and Mr.Pewhisrt
DeleteFirst Lieutenant Marks looks at the house from top to bottom over and over again. His soldiers wait silently around the house-the only house in the these forests- and patiently wait for Mark's word. He had a skeptical feeling about this house. It didn't feel like any ordinary house to him. It looked like it was hundreds, or maybe even thousands, years old, but no signs of any deterioration.
ReplyDeleteIf he sent in a few troops for analysis, he'd be breaking their top priority: to capture and neutralize any threats. The tension grew slowly, and when it looked like everyone would burst from waiting, Marks waved his hand forward.
One by one the troops entered the house to seize the killer. None one ever made it bad, and none will ever.
Once there was a old couple who was looking for a house when they came up to this old house in a very quiet neighborhood. They thought that something was lurking in the house at first but then the man came up with a idea.
ReplyDelete"Maybe i can use this house as a science lab said the man".
"no" said his wife.
He was skeptical that maybe if he came up with clever ideas she would let. "Would you let me get this house if the owner agrees to degrade the price for us" he added.
"If the owner agrees then our grown up kids will have to pay a contribution to the price" his wife states.
"No im not gonna contribute to the price because the house is already deteriorated already and it wont endure for a long time" his son replies.
"I'll only pay if the owner will reconstruct the house so that it would endure for a longer time period" replied by their daughter.
Their daughter thinks that her parents having a good house is the first priority.
They ended up getting the house.
THE END
Please let me know which version was better. This or the one I shared in class.
ReplyDeleteThis is so similar to the one you read in class- I think we'd have to see them side by side to compare.
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ReplyDeleteAn old man named Bill lived in a very old house. It was his priority to fix his home. But he got too old and didn’t get to finish. When Bill first mentioned to his parents that he would fix his house all alone, his parents were skeptical about that. Bill’s dad wanted to contribute to fix Bill’s home, but he wanted to do it all by himself. But Bill never did. Bill then had to move to a better home. After that people thought the house was too old. It was degrading every week. So nobody moved into the house. The house was starting to deteriorate. Builder had to take down the house. But they built a new one. For sure, they knew this house would endure.
The time was 1576 an old white house has been abandoned by its owner because of a spirit in the house. And also the fact the house was deteriorating. An a old man has stumbled into the house. He brought his only son with him. His son’s name was Jonas.
ReplyDeleteThey entered the house. “This should be great for now”, said the old man. “We had been exiled from Death Valley”, said Jonas. The were exiled after trying to kill the king. The king took Jonas’s mother away a killed her. “Father we should fix up this place”, said Jonas. “Yes if we both make a contribution of items”, said Jonas.
The next day Jonas went to hunt for food. He was attacked by a colossal bear. After 10 minutes the bear has so far ripped off his face and ate his whole body.
His father went out to find his son. The old man scoured the woods to find his son Jonas. Where has my son gone”, said the old man. Then he swung his durable sword and cut the trees.
After 3 days of scour for his son he killed himself by stabbing his head with his sword.
"Hey Laura, your coming to my birthday party right?" said Jennifer. "Of course I am, my best friend will never have a birthday party without me, but my priority is to finish my homework then come to your party." responded Laura. Laura and Jennifer started to laugh. RING! "Oh I got to get to class, I'll see you around 6!" yelled Jennifer through the hall. "You too! Happy Birthday!".
ReplyDeleteAs soon as Laura finished her homework, she asked her mother if she can go to Jennifer's house alone. Her mother wouldn't let her go alone cause she was skeptical that Laura would go out with boys and she doesn't think it's safe. But when Laura told her mother it was Jennifer's birthday, her mother told her she can only go if she goes with her. Laura didn't want to miss Jennifer's birthday party at all. She promised her she will come. So Laura had no choice but go with her mother.
When Laura reached Jennifer's house, she realized something bad has happened. Jennifer's house had a...FIRE! Laura started to worry and wanted to know where Laura and her mother was. So Laura's mother gave Jennifer a call but before she was done dialing the number Laura screamed "Mommy look! Its Jennifer!". Jennifer and Laura ran to each other. "OMG Jennifer what happened!? I was so worried!". Then Jennifer started explaining to Laura how her mother was making her birthday cake. Apparently, her mother put the temperature very high and left the cake in the oven way too long cause she was busy decorating. Laura was flabbergasted.
2 MONTHS LATER
Each day, Jennifer's house started to deteriorate fast. Jennifer and her mother didn't have a place to stay so she stayed over in Laura's house with her mother, father and brother. Laura and Jennifer would go to school together and come back together.
One day, Laura and her parents contributed Jennifer and her mother $10,000 so they can buy a house. A house that can endure.
THE END!
I think you're going to like my story :P
DeleteI loved it!
DeleteThank you so much I loved your story too! So unexpected :D
Delete"Can we stop running now,I think they've lost us by now" said Carl.
ReplyDeleteThe Judy started to cry really hard. You never know they could be anywhere. There is no where safe anymore.
"Those creatures are invaded Earth and they could appear anywhere" said Karen. It was the year 2027 and craetures from another planet invaded Earth, they pretend into human and kill the survivors which are us humans.It was Karen, Carl, Nicolas,Carl, and the baby. They then found a detoriate house a few miles away.Once they arrived they were hoping to stay the night and in the morning grab some supplies. For some reason Nicolas felt spectical about the house, he knew something was wrong. They went inside. They had all their weapons keeping an eye on the degraded house. carl wanted to contribute helping helping kill any creatures just like the grown ups had done so far, but he was too young to use a gun.
As they went into the house it look like the house has endured for hundreds of years. The ceilings were broken and water dripping from it. It smelled like someone died in there too. Karen knew that her priority was to keep the young ones safe since there is no where safe anymore. As they approached they found an old lady singing,
“There’s nowhere safe”
“I’ve invaded planet Earth”, she then said with a smerk.
“Should we help her?” said Luri
Nicolas looked at her. His eyes turned red and so did the old lady’s. She knew they were creatures. Luri and the rest ran and never came back.
One sunny day, two kids named Amanda and Pete lived in a non durable deteriorated house. They were looking forward to playing outside but once their mother left for work, it started to rain heavily. Now their both wondering what hey could do. All of a sudden they heard a hard knock on the door. They open to see it is a colossal cat standing right at them with a huge smile. They are thinking of letting the cat in but look at each other looking very skeptical. They are both dazzled by his queer hat. Once the cat is in the house it speaks to say "I am Dr. Seuss." While they are playing together the two kids seem to realize its not a cat it is a ZOMBIE!!!!! They told the cat(zombie) to leave immediately, but he would not listen. So their priority was to figure out a way to get him out. Instead all you hear is a loud scream that it even scared the crows away. Their mother comes home and finds her kids lying on the floor with teeth marks on them. She rushes they to the hospital to preserve them. The doctors rush both of the kids into a room and leaves them alone. No one around the room or kids. Then both of the kids eyes open with their eyes red as blood and then.........
ReplyDeleteThis is a REALLY scary story Erica, I like it :D
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Deletethx i was going for scary
DeleteThis story is so scary that i think I will have a nightmare
Deletesccccccaaaaarrrryyyyy. Good job though, Erica.
DeleteNice story Erica
DeleteOne day there was a girl Sky that lived by herself. She really did not have nobody to talk too. She went to the forest to get some Fresh Air. Until she caught an attention to a little house near sky's house.'' should i go inside the house or not''.But sky wasn't scared to go inside that little house.Until a lady came outside of her house looking really tired . So when sky looked at the ladies face, was skeptical of how much tired the lady was.The lady sad that she was really tired because of how much boxes she had to move to her new little house.
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DeleteThere was a deteriorate house in the forests of Massachusetts where it became opaque to the people of the urban community. People were skeptical about anyone living there after its incident in 1967 where a pack of wolves attacked the people living inside that house. But truly, a lumberjacker named Mark lived inside the endured house for about 14 years. Although Mark didn’t have any communication with the urban community, he still contributed in elections through online.
ReplyDeleteThen one day, Mark received a translucent envelope that stated that he was forced to move out of the house because of the houses degradation.How did the government find out? What was he going to do? Mark immediately gathered all the supporters he could find and set up a strike to prevent him from getting kicked out of his home. Mark always had a priority to his life outdoors than the modern world where it was destroying nature and its habitats. He wasn’t going to have a toll haunt him for the rest of his life.
The supporters worked hard trying to scour for explanations why the government can’t kick Mark out. Finally one day the supreme court ruled that Mark Jeffers was able to stay in the house for as long as he wanted to by the grand speech Mark made about how there could be ways to repair the house to save more money convincing the judges to give back Mark’s house to him. Mark is considered to be one of the most courageous lumberjacks of the twenty first century for carrying his peace care for nature.
This is a really motive story :)
DeleteWhats that supposed to mean?
Deletesomething good Aaron
DeleteYes, it is something good :D
DeleteIs it Really Haunted?
ReplyDelete“Pass the volleyball!” Dena shouted to Jennifer. It was a sunny day, the sun shining dazzlingly on Mother Earth’s surface. All of a sudden, clouds cover the sky, thunder and lightning strikes.
“Wow, it was sunny before and now there’s lightning and thunder?!” Jennifer said skeptically.
“Let’s go! It’s starting to rain, I don’t want to get wet!” Dena pulled Jennifer near has she said.
“Okay, let’s go find the nearest house.” Jennifer replied, heading to the north.
The two girls approached a house just as the rain poured.
“Hey, I don’t want to go inside this house, it’s so old and deteriorated. Remember, our priority was just not to get wet, not going in a creepy house.” Dena told Jennifer, but Jennifer did not listen, she’s very curious of what’s in the degraded house.
Just then, rain stopped pouring, the sun came back, dazzling again, and there’s even rainbow!
“Hey, Dena, let’s just visit this house, it won’t be a big deal. Plus, we came here after all, right?” Jennifer pleaded.
“Okay, fine, but remember to stay near me!” Dena finally agreed.
The two girls went into the house, there was literally nothing in it! They found a paper that had a advertisement on selling houses. The house was big and on sale. They both concluded that the owners of this house had moved, leaving this house empty. They also inferred that the owners haven’t left long ago since the house was still clean.
“Wow, this is a very colossal house and is actually very endurable. Fate has probably brought us here!” Jennifer said astonishingly.
“Well, at least it’s not that creepy anymore!” Dena’s tone just ended as a spider crawled onto her face.
“Eeeeeeeeekkkkkkkkkk, let’s get out of here!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!” Dena screamed as Jennifer, without hesitating took the spider of her face.
The two girls left the house. They looked carefully at the house. Under the rainbow, the house actually looked very beautiful and dazzling.
“Wake up, Dena, wake up!!!” Jennifer literally screamed at her.
“Oh, sis, it was all a dream???” Dena woke in confusion, still smiling about the happy dream she had.
The Shady Old House
ReplyDeleteThat house had endured for such a long time Max thought. Now it is in shambles and starting to deteriorate. Then he realized how to save it. “I know how to fix it, I would organize a colossal project that everyone would contribute to fix the house. It’s genius.”
Everyone is at the house carrying tools and ready to change its fate. A bugle sounds and everyone starts to head toward the house. It was everybody’s priority to fix this house up.
One of the boys Sam had been hammering down the nails when he saw something glow. He looked down and saw a treasure. He was skeptical and flabbergasted. He told about it to Max and he said that this was his great grandfather’s treasure. They used the money to fix the house and they lived happily ever after.
Adriana and nicol and angel were walking up the hill and found a a creepy house they went in without knowing theri was spirites their and a dead girl body they headed to the living room they saw pictures of the family and Adriana found picture of a little girl memor it said to a little girl spirit may rest in peace where ever your body is .
ReplyDeleteAngle screamed she found dried blood on the staircase floor they all went to speprate 3 rooms Adriana to the little girl room Nicol was in the boy room and Angel in the parents room Nicol and Angel heard Adrian scream they both ran to the little girl room adrian standing theri scared she saw a rope and hanging room with a body it was the little girl body the heard a nosie .
It was coing from the boy room then they saw spirit standing theri writing on the wall saying RUN !!!!!!!! I AM COMING TO KILL YOU then the girls shocked and scared Nicol said this is presumably Adriana said it true i saw a letter downsatirs int he living room saying to my little sister we love you to were is your body they never found it and now its her when we are the body is in her room .
Angel ,Nicol,Adriana started to run to the fast way to leave then all of the door shut and closed and the windows look they heard a creepy laugh HAHAHHAHAHA then Adriana opend the closet the spirit was theri it came out and slowly lifted Adriana into the air and hit Adriana in to the wall Adrian to faint Nicol and Angel ran to her but she was still alive then the ghost said i hope i can eat one of you to the girls ran out of the room carrying Adrian body they went tot he ktchen the put adriana body on the floor .
Then Angel and Nicol tried to find salt and blessing water the found it andput it in a circle and and around the room but by accident Nicol forgot to put soem on her the spirit controlled Nicol Body the spirit was fighting angel then then angel compelled to put BLESSING WATER on Nicol body and the spirit died and leaft alone Nicol body Angel wook up Adrian and Nicol sai LETS GET OUT OF HERE NOW WE CANT STAY HERE they got up and ran out of the house and never RETURNED .
THE END
Scary, but good :D
DeleteOnce a upon a time, there was a dark dark house with a dark dark house. Nvm. Sans and Papyrus was out in the snow near their colossal house. Sans, normal as usual, lazy and that. Papyrus on the other hand is getting Sans out of the pile of snow.
ReplyDelete"Get up, you lazy bones!" Papyrus yelled.
"ZzzzzzZzzz...Ugh." Sans Said. "What happened.
"You just fell down and... Spaghetti of meatballs! A human! We did it!" Papyrus exclaimed.
"Hi" Frisk said.
"Yay. Zz" Sans did. "A human? Awesome!"
Papyrus was battling Frisk and he won. Sans and Papyrus, which was dragging Frisk on the snow, was going to their home. Papyrus slammed the door which the force also deteriorate the door hanger.
"So, human" Papyrus said.
"..."
" Alphabeti spaghetti!" Papyrus said.
Frisk has no choice and Papyrus compelled him to eat his spaghetti. Frisk slammed his face to the alphabet spaghetti and when he look up, there was letter on his face. It said "Dunked on". Sans laugh so hard that he made a pitting on the floor by stomping his feet. Papyrus gasp.
I hour later.
Sans was skeptical that Papyrus defeated the human without using a single force. So Sans bro wrestle his brother.
The End..
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DeleteI now see what happens in dark houses.
DeleteNice use of vocab, but next time maybe you could use more details.
The not so dazzling house
ReplyDeleteThere was this house in the forest and a man named Jake said that his top priority to fix this house. Because the house is deteriorating and Jake wanted to fix it . He went there but he thought he saw something in the window but he was skeptical about this thought and then he went in to see the interior to find that this grand house and he found that the house inside looked new and that somebody was living here so he did see something in the window. Jake thought there would be a colossal mess but there was wasn't and he met the man who lived there he said that he thrived in life but a terrible event happened to him and now he stays in this house and he doesn't want the outside to look dazzling so nobody see him and like that Jake left and in town he said he couldn't fix it.
Once upon a time there were a family of four and it was Halloween so they wanted to make a haunted house,so they rented an apartment in the middle of a jungle. But then one of the owners that lived there before was like watch out for the creepy sounds at night. The mom and dad both had a type of deformity on there and people were afraid of them. The house was only a transitory so it worked out perfectly because they didn't want to keep the haunted house for long. The house look liked it was gonna deteriorate. The owner made the cost of the house degrade so that it doesn't cost that much. The new owners considered not to sell the house but instead they did because they needed the money. All of a sudden when they were decorating they heard weird sounds coming from the bathroom. Then the family went to go and see it, but what they saw was the old owner behind a curtain controlling a machine that played the creepy sounds then they found out that there where no ghosts.
ReplyDeleteJerry came to his sister's 19th Birthday. He had thought the perfect Birthday present. He made an appointment to go into the deep woods and look around nature.
ReplyDeleteWhen they got there it was Beautiful, there were green trees, many animals and a river that they met.
"Wow this place is beautiful" Samantha exclaimed
"I know! It was pretty pricey but I think it was worth it" Jerry replied
"Whats that?" Samantha whispered in fright "It looks haunted"
"Its just deteriorated and just couldn't endure the wild in these woods" Jerry said
"Do you want to check it out? It will be a great adventure!" She Replied
"It might be too dangerous and could collapse if we go in there, its too fragile" Jerry Explained
As they walked by the haunted looking house, they saw a sign of beware of ghosts!
"Uhhh, You think we should get out like the sign says?" Samantha said
"Ghosts aren't real I hope you know that since you ARE 19" Jerry said "Yeah but I'm just paranoid from the house back there" Samantha exclaimed
"Look" Jerry replied
As they walk back to the house, see something change, It was the trees. They made some kind of path and they didn't recognize.
"Look, I'm going to walk in and prove you that there is nothing wrong and no such things as Ghost!" Jerry told
They heard a voice.
"GET OUT!" Someone said
They both ran back out and it started to get dark.
"What was that!?!?!?" Samantha Yelled
"I don't understand, that was something I have never knew it was a..."
"GHOST!" They both screamed
They tried to forget it from that day but memories don't get forgotten, they will always be in your mind some where
Once upon a time three sisters named Ruby, Lizzie, Lily, they were going to find this Deteriorate house that they heard about. I heard that a witch lives there said Ruby I heard that no one can get out of this house said Lizzie I heard that the witch kills any one that comes in her house said lily I guess we are going to find out said Lizzie I am feeling a little bit skeptical come in this house said lily I found the house said Ruby come lets go inside the house.
ReplyDeleteThe girls went inside the old house. Its scary in here said Ruby the house has seletons of people who ever came to this house and there was a sign that said there is no escape what does that mean said Lizzie we Better get out of here before the witch finds us said Ruby the door is lock!!!!!!!! said Lizzie but then some one was coming and it was the witch the witch is here hide said Lizzie when she was screaming as the girls hide the witch realizes that some one was in her house.
Come out where ever you are said the witch you can't hide forever. Now our priority is to get out here Said Lizzie but how she will find us eventually said Ruby will just have to sneak around to find a other way out said Lily lets go the girls were crawling so that the witch doesn't see them. The girls found a way out great come before she comes said Ruby then the witch found them not so fast said the witch grabbing Lily and Lizzie. Run Ruby!!! said the two the girls Ruby jump out of the window then the witch kill the two girls with here magic. No!!! said Ruby she run away as fast as far way form the Deteriorate house
The End !!!!!!!!!!
In a far place from hear their was house deep in the forest their was a family living in that house there was a girl and her mom and dad. One day they herd that their was tornado going their way. The family was ready to go but it was to lat for the girl. He saw that she had left he doll so she whet to get it but the family had to go in to the basement and the girl not in the tornado and died when the tornado past the girls body was in the floor. A lot of years when by and in w to modern day and a family choose to make a house there they made it but every day their was voice of a little girl that all tried to say help me. The family was scared because it scared the kids so they called expert. They found out their us to be a girl that lived in this house that was here before and died because of the tornado so they left and that house has not bin touched until this day.
ReplyDeleteThere once was a couple finding a house to live in.2 day later, they have founded a house in the corner of the street. It was on odd, degraded looking house. So they decided to check it out,it was degrading. so, the couple had to make a choice between the regular house or the degrading house. They chose the degrading house. 5 weeks later, there was a storm. A day later, the man was skeptical because the house was starting to deteriorate. So, they hired construction workers to contribute their house so they can endure it forever.
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ReplyDeleteAthena had grown up in the most beautiful, astonishing, and dazzling neighborhood you could imagine, but there was always one house in particular that always caught her eye. Unlike the other house this one was deteriorating, and starting to degrade. It was rumored to be a house where creatures such as werewolves roamed. Athena was very skeptical about what had been said. But she knew it was her priority to find out the truth about that house. But she wasn’t the only one who had been curious, some of her friends shared her thoughts and they all contributed ideas of how to find out the truth. So they couldn’t take it anymore (the mystery) and just snuck into the house. They didn’t know what they were in for because what had been rumored had been true. It turns out that the family of werewolves that lived in that house had tried to keep their secret covert and when they saw Athena and her friends knew they needed to be eliminated. So everyone, but Athena had been found dead the following day.
I like how you put specific details in your short story.
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ReplyDeleteZayn, a loud voice from upstairs call.We got to get going said Harry from upstairs.Niall and Louis were sitting in the living room fooling around while Liam and Zayn were loading the bags into the olive color jeep.Couple of hours driving went by.Louis stopped on an exit to take a break from driving.Everyone got of the jeep and stretched.Liam walked around to look for any restaurant but the whole place was abandoned.”Guys”,said Liam,The boys rushed to Liam.What happened said Zayn,Look Liam replied to his loud voice.And there stood an abandoned deteriorate house surrounded by a lot of bushes.The house looks abandoned says Harry,”You don’t say” Louis replies in a grand sarcastic voice.Harry and Louis both start arguing “Guys,Guys”calm down and let’s leave this place,NO! said Niall in a mean loud voice.,I want to go inside says Louis.They both started whining.Oh My God we will go in and you both have to stop your whining said Liam in a Loud voice that was almost as loud as drums,YAY!! said Niall and Louis say toghther.My fate is to be stuck with you boys mutters Liam to himself.We all were about to step in and we heard eerie voices from inside the house we all were flabbergasted.We all were about to step in when Zayn says ”Wait” i am feeling a little skeptical about going inside,Yeah me too,I am feeling a bit self conscious said Harry in a low voice.Okay boys outside here i am the biggest and it is my priority to keep you guys away from dangerous things So we are going strait to the airport from here says Liam.Louis and Niall both say in unison Okay :-(.Great to the airport!!!.
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ReplyDeleteIt was the night before halloween. Mckayla live in this colossal and beautiful home with her mom and dad. Mckayla was getting ready for school that morning.
ReplyDelete“Hey mom can i have a party tomorrow” said Mckayla
“Yea sure but don't invite to much people “ she said
“ok bye mom”
Her mom was skeptical if she would invite to much people.
Mckayla was on the bus getting to school so she started to invite people to her halloween party. when she was almost at school she made a tally to figure out how many people are going and there is 17 people going to her party.
when she got to school she asked her friends Sierra and Maddie if they can contribute for the party. They said yes. It was her priority to finish her party before 9:00 pm.
Mckayla went to her classroom as the bell rang. She invited about 23 more people to her party when she was in class. She thought that she needed more help so tried to find someone else. Mckayla looked around the class.
She found the new girl in her class Maya so she asked her if she wanted to help her.
“Yea sure i could help you” Maya said
“Thank you for helping me”
So Mckayla invited them over to her house to start decorating. Maya and maddie scoured through the colossal decorations to find streamers.
The decorations are all persevered in boxes in the attic mckayla said
Mckayla’s mom came up to them and said “ a hurricane is coming here tomorrow.
“Really said Mckayla and the others”
They continued decorated the outside and inside.Would the decorations blow away said Maddie. No they won't they are very heavy and durable said sierra.
It was the next day and they went to school together since they had a sleepover. They went together and they kinda got worried since it was super windy outside. They gave the time to the students that were invited to the party.School was over and they went to mckayla's house.
They scoured all over the pantry to find candy.They prepared everything and it was finally the party. Kids started to come in and it was a blast. Until the decoration broke and everything broke. They stayed in the enduring basement. They stayed down there until the hurricane calmed down.They went to check the house and the house was deteriorating. The house corroded in the next few minutes. The kids went home and Mckayla stayed in her grandparents house for the next few months until it is done being reconstructed.
In a forest, a house was sitting there, It looks like an deteriorated building that has been degraded. Now, a wandering person Greg was staring at the house, being skeptical about it being destroyed. When Gregory had entered, he had been petrified because it had looked spooky. When he found a corroded kitchen, Greg had realize that the house is deteriorating and had made a run for it. But luckily, he had been preserved by the time the colossal building had been collapsed. The house does not have a lot of durability so it just instantly broke.
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ReplyDeletethere was once a really Deteriorated house that was degraded but it has something important.sure your probably skeptical but what lies in the house is a lab that holds a alien queen and a predator hunting the beast.The predator was just out side the house to hunt her because his rank from a elite to elder and his honor were priority but little did he know that the queen knew he was here.meanwhile with the queen,she and her hive had endure threats like human soldiers, small groups of predators.The queen would deal with the predator but her wounds took a toll on her and she molting to a empress,a super queen which is a delicate process so she sent her praetorians honor guards with squads of warriors,runners.mean while the predator went inside the house and saw a dead scientist everywhere but that's normal for him.he easily found the lab with his x-ray vision for his's mask and jump to a high platform before he got caught by two pratorians and there squads.(lets call them langening and Raymond.)langening thought she saw the predator but raymond did not believe her.at predator thought he was safe but a random warrior saw him but the predator just use his way superior strength and did a back breaker before the warrior can do anything.later the predator saw two different praetorians guarding the facehugger area (lets call them Ricky.w and Ricky.y)so he shot ricky.w with his plasma caster and blew him up and he threw his smart disc (think Frisbee with razor sharp edges) to the other.put right after that langening and Raymond turn the corner and they had their squad with them.immediately runners came rushing towards the predator and langening and Raymond calling for reinforcement.The predator shot Raymond and langening with his net gun to stall them while he use his plasma whip to slice all the runners at once.then the warriors came and the predator slice,dice,stab and fought the warriors with his wrist blade.while he was killing all the warriors,langening and Raymond broke free and they ran up to the predator and headbutt him which knocked him down.The predator got back and lunged at Raymond and slice his head off,then threw langening into the facehugger area and threw his spear at her which and killed her.right after he took his spear out off langening's corpse papyrus.finally he got to the queen and she was done molting.She was now a empress and three times bigger and stronger.She roared at the predator.the predator shot plasma from his shoulder cannon but it barley harmed her.She swiped at the predator but missed and the predator tried harming her legs with his wrist blades but nothing happened. she then try stomping the predator but he jumped out off the way and shot plasma at her.she started to get annoyed and charge at him and the predator started running.the predator made it above ground and he ran into the jungle.He had a enough so he decide to drop all off his equipment accepted,wrist blades.he jumped over the empress and got on her back and stab,at her neck until she used her tali to stab him an bring him towards her face.she opened her mouth try to bite him with her tongue which has a mouth and teeth on it but the predator with expert reaction, cut it off and with all his might cut her tail off lunge at her neck an cut it off.HE was proud off him self.he took out two needles out stab him self with them a healed his wounds.
BONUS:sans and papyrus
DeleteThe predator before he went to kill the queen he saw papyrus and sans right after he killed langening he saw papyrus and sans stuck to the wall.Papyrus said "that was brutal." sans asked papyrus"are hungry.Papyrus says a bit but why are asking... then sans says"because i have spear-ghetti.Papyrus yells"CAN YOU TAKE THIS SERIOUSLY WE LOST FRISK AND WE ARE CAPTURED CONTRIBUTE OUR ESCAPE!!! sans"ok Jesus" and asked the predator "can you cut us down cuss that will help a SKELLO-TON.papyrus yell "OH MY GOD".Then the predator leaves annoyed of the puns.papyrus says"great you scared him away"then while the predator was running from the emppres sans says"you here to cut us... and then interrupted by the empress's roar.Papyrus and sans say"oh".Then the emppress's tail cuts them down they starting running to the hallway Going to find frisk.They find her dodging the attacks of warriors.Sans kills them with his gaster blasters.Sans and papyrus run up to frisk up to her and hug her saying"thank god your safe!"Papyrus then puts her on his shoulders sans says let"s bring you home before your mom toriel kills us.sans asked "how long have you been dodging frisk shruggs saying "a hour" papyrus and sans just say "wow
HE took the empress's head to show to his chieftain and prove him self the new elder
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ReplyDeleteOnce there was a house built near the end of the forest and it was one of the most durable1 houses in the state, it was built to endure2. The house was abandoned. But one sudden night there was a terrible incident, there was a murder.
The police checked every house, except the one at the end of the forest. The police began to feel skeptical3 about the house every time they walk by, for the first time there was one policeman who contributed4 to go inside. Ever since that man went inside he was never seen again.
The next time they sent the police to check out the house, they sent 13 so if they see anything at all there could be a chance for one to get out. But yet no one was seen from that group no one heard a peep from the house.
The head police said to his men, “we can't take the risk of losing any of our men any more, let this be known to all the townsfolk that no one can enter that house.”
From that day no one set foot on the house, not even a single bird. After a decade still no one would would touch the house it began to degrade, and deteriorate.
One man was brave enough to go in, he was old, he said he was going to die soon so he doesn't care if he dies earlier. It became the man's priority5 to try to make it out alive than to end up like the rest. The next day, the man woke up and he was ready as ever to go into that house. When he confronted it he looked at it as if it was his baby, which confused most of the people watching him. He stepped inside and there was a moment of silence for a second but it all stopped when they heard the door burst open, the old man came out alive, but he turned out to be 30 years younger. He found out why most people were not seen out, it was because most of them were in there 20’s and they age backward when they were not born.
THE END
I like it!!!
Delete“Jeon!!! Ya sure you know where we’re going?!” Yoongi asked. 3 friends were walking in the grand woods. They got lost from their school trip days ago. No one knows how many days it has been, What day of the week it is or what time is it! All their phones were able to endure but there was no signal.
ReplyDelete“Uhh...ya I know…” Jeon said unsure. Kim was skeptical.
“Are you sure?”
“Uhhh… Ya. I’m sure” answered Jeon
“Oh come on!!! I don’t want to get lost!!” shouted Kim
“We ARE already lost, Kim!!!” Yoongi talked back
A few moments later, it started drizzling. The started to pour out of the sky.
“There!!! I found a house!!!” shouted Kim. Everyone sighed in relieve. They went near the colossal house and saw it was degraded.
“Oooooooo. I think no one is in there.” Jeon said.
“Eh it’s fine” Yoongi said surely. ‘Ya I doubt that’ thought Kim in her head.
They walked inside. They were expecting someone to be inside there but there was no one inside.
“Gross. It’s so dirty inside here!” complained Kim.
“What do you expect, man? It’s a deteriorated house!” said Yoongi. They found a little space where they could lay down and rest.
The next day, there was a crash at the door.
“Hello?! Is anybody in here?!” A voice said. “It’s the police!”
“Guys!! Quick!! Let’s go to them!” Yoongi said. All of them ran to the door. The police were in the front door. They turned around and the kids saw their parents. They were now found.
PS/IS/102Q Melissa Cumbe
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The Queer house
There once was a family and a dazzling house. A Lot of people thought the house was queer well I thought my house was amazing , oh and by the way I am Melissa. I live with my mom and dad and my 2 siblings and my dog Peanut.
It was summertime and that means I had to do some volunteer work for school so i decided to help clean the beach to make it look enchanting, so me and my friends decided to contribute my friends are Alessandra, Jasmine,Erica and Julissa.
My mom drove up to suykens meadows beach to do our volunteer work after that we went for a swim because we were having a very hot day. After our fun day we came back to my house and because of the heatness my house was deteriorate i was very sad but my friends parents contribute to take out my thing from my house.
At the end we all got burritos and noodles burgers and donuts
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ReplyDeleteKevin thought a camping trip would clear his mind. What a terrible mistake it was to listen to his sister Mavis. She ended up getting them lost in the woods within 5 minutes. After their mother got involved in a car crash Mavis suggested they go out on a camping trip to keep them from taking a toll, it would have been something mom wanted but dad put Mavis in charge and here they were camping in the woods.
“Your such an esteem navigator Mavis, i totally don’t regret coming here with you” Kevin said sarcastically.
“Don’t worry, i spotted a house around here, I’ll see if there’s any supplies since i forgot water but it’s a bit degraded” Mavis replied.
Kevin’s eyes widened and he scoured through their bags, thriving to find water until he realized she really didn’t pack any water. He will never go anywhere alone with his sister again.
“before you start yelling at me, let’s check out the house” said Mavis.
Kevin muttered silently and followed Mavis as she began to walk. When they reached the house he was surprised of how grand it was. It looked like it had endured for a long time but time has taken a toll on it. The windows were all broken and the house look like it was about to deteriorate at any moment, thought the translucent door was intact.
“Let’s see what’s inside” said Mavis, ignoring her brother’s skeptical look.
“It looks like it’ll collapse the moment we said foot in there” said Kevin and made an easy decision. “You’re going in there first”
“Fine”
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Kevin was starting to get worried, Mavis hadn’t shown up and it was nearly sundown. He finally decided to step inside and search for her. The house looked better inside, though some of the stairs where broken and there was also the shattered windows. He heard a sound coming from the living room and flinched.
“Who’s there?” he asked.
“Kevin!, i completely forgot about you, meet Mark” he heard Mavis’s voice coming from there.
It turned out someone lived in the house and Kevin and Mavis had fun with Mark as he told them all the history behind this house and how his family had owned this land for generations, which is why he decided to stay there, in contact with nature. After they left Kevin decided to make it his priority to help Mark make the house look better and would contribute to help the house.
I didn't expect this to be THAT long
DeleteWell mine was LONGER
DeleteSo its ok :)
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ReplyDeleteThere was once a man who built a very durable house.As the years went bye, the house was deteriorating.The man was named Jake Epping and he soon married a woman named Mary Jane . One day he had seen her talking on the phone with a man who was making her blush.He started to get skeptical over the days and divorced her. Jake one day noticed how much his house has degraded. He rebuilt it by himself, it took a couple weeks but it happened and the house was back to normal. Then one day he was on face book and saw his ex-wife with her father and making the same blushing face. He felt so embarrassed and felt so bad for what he did to her. He decided that it was his priority to get back with her. Everything was normal when they were back together until one day while sleeping in the old house, something or someone had pulled off their covers. They called in a psychic to help them but had randomly choked to death while whispering words into the room, where the incident with the covers had happened.Then Mary one day decided she did not want to live in a house where a person died mysteriously. Jake told her that they can live a sane life in the house. One day while Jake was contributing food to the fridge he had heard a chair fall down upstairs. So he went to investigate. His wife had tied her neck to the ceiling and killed herself. After seeing this Jake had took a day thinking "WHAT THE HECK SHOULD I DO!" then it came clear to him he had no meaning without the only family he has (he was an only child and most of his family had died a couple years ago from a massacre. He wrote a note to anyone who sees what has happened that said:
ReplyDeleteIm sorry to anyone who has to witness this situation.If its possible bury me and my wife next to each other and buy the biggest tombstones with the money i have."
He picked up his wife and set her down on their bed.and stood beside her for a second and picked up the rope she had used.he tied up his neck to the ceiling and stood on a chair and ready as ever to kick the chair away. He kicked it away and slowly faded away.
"hey i dare you to go in that house Jhonny!"said a kid wearing a sweater and some some red sweat pants.
"no way man, you do it Paul" said Jhonny
"fine ill go in" said Paul
As they stepped in a tall shadow had shown over them.
"WHAT IS THAT?" said Jhonny
The shadow had emerged from the kitchen.and the kids went deeper into the house to find two shadows now roaming around the walls of the hallway next to the kitchen.
"Go in CHICKEN!" said Paul as he pushed Jhonny towards the shadows.
The two shadows happened to be Jake and Mary but walking and smelling rotten.
"is that you Ms.Jane? and is that you Mr.Jake"whispered Jhonny
Mary stumbled toward Paul making groaning noises. Before Paul could say help Mary sunk her teeth deep into Paul's neck killing him.Then Jhonny was so scared he could not move and what used to be Jake walked toward him and grabbed Jhonny's head and crunched into his shoulder. when Mary had finished devouring what was left of Paul she went toward a terrified child that is being eaten alive. She grabbed his belly area and split it open.Paul and Jhonny had contributed their body's to Jake and Mary's stomach.All that was left was tiny pieces of meat and bones. After this event Jake and Mary's bodies have decomposed and were both piles of red liquid on the floor.
The End!
LoL sorry if this story made yo wanna throw up.
OH wait i forgot the end part of the story here it is:
DeleteNow all four of their souls are resting in peace.
Mark was driving when he was flabbergasted see a deteriorated house in the forest. The house looked abandoned and the house has been degraded. Mark was skeptical about going inside, but he was curious so he went in. After looking in to different rooms, Mark saw and heard weird things. He had a feeling the paintings were watching him,and objects were moving by themselves. Then, he saw ghosts and tried to get out but the door he entered in was locked and he was trapped in a house full of ghosts.
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ReplyDeleteUntold Shrek
It was 2013 ( 3 years before he had met Fiona) , Shrek had bought this abandoned house and his own lagoon. Shrek was moving to a prosperous city, Beverly Hills. This is the house he's been looking for a long time. Until Donkey came along and killed the vibe. Donkey had followed him all the way to the new home. “ AAAAAAahhhhh” Shrek shrieked when he had seen Donkey behind him. “ Hello from the other side” said Donkey. Shrek had thought for a moment about living with Donkey. “ Sure why not” said Shrek. “ Sure why not what?” Said Donkey. “Nothing”said Shrek. “What do you mean?” said Donkey. “ Let's just enter the house already” said impatiently Shrek. They entered the Grand new home. You might have thought it is an ugly,abandoned, degraded house. Donkey was so flabbergasted the house. Inside the house was a mansion with a chocolate fountain, domino's pizza, Reese's , kit kats and Spongebob and Patrick waiting for them to enter. Now you might be having Skeptical feelings about this house. They had lived there for three whole years. After those three years are the Story told of Shrek. Don't forget to contribute to the Shrek & Donkey Foundation!.
~ Keep up Appearances, There lies the test, The world will give thee credit for the rest~
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ReplyDeleteThe man bought the old deotorating house to live it. He was very supersticious and was skeptical when the real estate agent told him his house was not haunted. The old house had endured the elements for over a centry and it looked like it was going to collapse. Its value is also degrading every year. When the man entered the house, the door swung shut and to this day, no one knows of the old man's fate.
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ReplyDeleteMerriam always helps her mom pay the house rent, food, and clothes.
She has a job that she says is her, "number one PRIORITY!"
Her mom is always thankful for what she does for her family (Merriam and mom)
Their house is really expensive but they had no choice, there was only one house left.
Her mom was FLABBERGASTED and SKEPTICAL by the quality of the house, so we always took very good care of it but no matter how much they try it just keeps DETERIORATING!
Merriam and her mom always ask friends and neighbors if they would like to CONTRIBUTE some money to us or help us to create a new ENDURANCE house for their family but everybody thought that it was impossible.
By the time it was Merriam's mom's birthday, they were in a new house and town because the old house was already DEGRADED.
Nick's Fire Heart
ReplyDeleteOnce upon a time, there was a deteriorated house near the woods. Udonna was the owner of the woods,but she never knew about the worn out house at the end of the woods.
"Uuuudonaaaaaaaaa!" yelled Clare. "Where are you?"
Clare was a sourserous in training. She was trained by Udonna, her aunt. Nick, Vida, Madison, Chip, and Xander were mystic rangers. They were the savers of the world . After Nick, the red ranger Koragg, his father that he didn't know, Koragg rose from the underworld and foughtby the mystic rangers. Koragg was endured to become Aliandor forever. Aliandor was Udonna's husband. Aliandor and Udonna had a son named Nick, but nick didn't know.
After seven years passed, Udonna called the mystic rangers to go in the end of the woods to look at the fallen apart house. Nick went inside to take a look and he saw fire heart. There was a golden and red box and a note beside it. Chip took a look and found out the answer to the riddle. Fire Heart's connection was Nick. Since Fire Heart was special to him , he wanted to show Clare ,his cousin, but Fire Heart was stuck.
"Fire Heart ,come on!" grasped Nick. Fire Heart roared fire to
Nick. Then, he relized Fire Heart was stuck next to a cave. Nick went inside the cave and there was a emporer. The emporer was an evil man who was a master over the Fire dragon., but he wanted to defeat the emporer and set Fire Heart free.
Nick had defeated the emporer and contributed to the Fire Dragon. It was Nick's priority to defeat the emporer and get Fire Heart.
Nick thought before he defeated the evil emporer, he was skeptical that the evil emporer was not evil, but by his act of skill, Nick new he was evil.
Nick was excited to train Fire Heart and play with him. Nick had invited his friends to see Fire Heart. They thought he was cute! THE END!
The House
ReplyDeleteOn one beautiful day a boy name George and 3 girls named Angela , perla , and Cecilia were going to a old looking white house to contribute the house to endure it . Angela and George thought doing this was a priority to be helpful. Perla and Cecilia was thinking skeptical about it . while they all was working on the house everything was a deterioration , nothing was working . George thought they were degrading it . they thought it was nothing to do for the house they broke it down and built a small play house for them to relax sometimes after school . ������
Dwarfs
ReplyDeleteOne day a girl name Snow White lived in a cottage. Seven dwarfs came along the forest and saw the deteriorating cottage,they were flabbergasted on the way the cottage looked, by then they all started to argue weighed to head inside.
"Hey Goofy lets head inside" says Happy
"No way I'm going in that cottage! I'm starting to feel skeptical that this cottage would be durable enough to keep hold itself.
"Hey! Come on guys lets go in" Silly chanted
Everyone started Marching into the cottage.
When they arrived inside they, Snow White awoke from her cat nap from all that noise.
"Ughhhhhh WHAT IS THAT NOISE" Snow White all of a sudden had the feeling that she was being robbed. She grabbed what ever seemed like a weapon.
She walked out her bedroom. She saw the seven dwarfs and starred feeling self-conscious. Then she came up with all different types of questions and drove them crazy until they left.
I like it, twin!!!!!!!!
DeleteIt’s about time. You run outside of your house, waving goodbye. They wouldn’t know what you’re doing and where you’re going. Perfect. Summer breeze blowing your hair around wildly. You had always hated humanity. You’ve been thinking about it… Today’s the day that you’re going to leave them.
ReplyDeleteYou climb up Mt. Ebott. Legends say that those who climb the mountain never return. You take the risk, you’d do anything to get away from humanity. Getting away was your top priority. Suddenly, you start feeling skeptical. “Was this the right choice?” You began to think. “Should I be doing this..?” You wonder. Caught in confusion and doubt, you fall down a hole.
You wake up to a nudge. You wake up and turn your head to see a goat-like creature next to you, worried. “Oh, you’ve fallen down, haven’t you…” They say, looking upwards. “Are you okay? Here, get up...” They say, holding out their hand. Despite being injured, you reach out to them, pain searing throughout your entire body. You wonder how you had endured the fall. You wonder why you didn’t die. You trust them. You tell them your name.
“Chara, huh?” They reply. “That’s a nice name..” They smile. “My name is-”
They’re cut off as everything fades to white. You open your eyes, in the head on a pile of leaves. A concerned-looking goat-like woman looks down at you, while she sits next to you. You struggle to get up, but your wounds hurt… You feel like you’re bound to the ground.
She looks at you in surprise. “Ah, do not be afraid, my child. I am Toriel, Queen of the underground.” Toriel says, smiling. You nod. The creature you met from before peeks out from behind a deteriorated-looking pillar. They walk towards you. “I’m Asriel… Are you okay? You passed out before I could tell you my name!” They continue, worried. “Asriel.” You think, nodding.
Toriel picks you up, and takes you to a house. It seems kind of odd for it to be there in the middle of the “Undergound”, or whatever this place actually is. It looks small and…. Not as degraded as you would expect. You look away to see a taller goat monster walking away. “Is that the king?” You wonder, looking up at Toriel. “She did say she was the queen…” You continue.
You tug on her dress sleeve, feeling determined to get up. Toriel looked overjoyed and lets you walk on your own. You feel pain, but you stay determined, walking into the house.
Sitting down on one of the chairs, Toriel passes you a slice of gross-looking pie. You poke it. “Is that… a Snail?” You ask, disgusted. Toriel laughs nervously and swaps your pie with hers-one looking delicious with the tint of butterscotch. Unfortunately, it wasn’t chocolate. Eh, it’ll have to do. Toriel sits down and tells the story of how they had gotten trapped here in the underground.
“Six human souls…” She says. “And we will be free.”
You feel like you know exactly what you need to do. You wonder if your life will ever be the same after that. Nothing will ever be the same again.
Creepy and very imaginary, I like it :D
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ReplyDeleteOn day in the middle of Oregon, 3 kids find a Deteriorated house in the middle of the forest.
"Ooh, i think that we should go inside"
"NO" Screamed Michael "I mean, no"," I really don't think that it's a good idea to go inside a creepy old house,plus i don't think that i can endure the webs in there".
"I agree with Michael because in all the book that start good end bad" said Oliver
"Ugh, since you guys are so boring i'll go myself"
"No"
"No"
They Chase him into the house, but...
Suddenly the door closes behind them and they all hear, Now I've got you-now i'm going to eat you
They scream and running with each other looking at all sides. Finally they see a bright light in the corners of their eyes.
It's gone.
Then more of the lights appeared everywhere they thought that would have past out in the creepy house but they were to scared to. The fear in all of them that they forgot what teamwork is. They all ran in separate ways. First we look about on Oliver he was the one that ran the fastest. He sprinted trying to find the exit but them people that he new grabbed him.
"O MY GAWD" he yelled and he was brought outside
So After we look over Michael. He is someone who would get super scared, he gets pulled out of the house and screamed as high as he can and got a sore throat
They both waited for half an hour trying to get him into the room that he would get pulled out but he never came back.
Once, I was cooling for my sister's birthday party. It was enduring because I was cooking for two hours just for her. I had to make sure the fire wasn't going to spread because I would be in a huge trouble. I was rushing really bad until the clothe touch the fire and started to spread. I was skeptical that the firefighters came to my house without me calling. The firefighters tried to stop the fire, but it just kept spreading. A few minute later, my house was deteriorated because it was burned down. My friends contributed some money to me, so I could buy another house sooner. Now my priority is just to get another house and nothing more.
ReplyDeleteI mean cooking, not cooling.
DeleteWillison robert 30 year old detective was called to Contribute on a case of the abduction of oliver mary age 18.” Last seen going to a deteriorate slipshod Charcoal house by the witness.” Charly texted, “Who was the witness?” texted Willison back. “Well the witness was his girlfriend and she has a Nasty attitude of i must say so myself. What do you think” “mmmmmmmmm???, Is this house located in the middle of the woods?” Willison ask. “Yes, how did you know?” “well i read a cold case about the house from the year 1999 may 7th, a father named diego lenders went out looking for his 6 year old daughter in the woods but told his wife to stay in the car, after around two hour the mother got worried that something happened to them and O’boy she was right, looking in the woods she found a charcoal house dough back then the house was in perfect condition but when she went inside the house the mother found the dead body of her husband in the wooden floor face down and there was writing in the walls from his blood saying here the scary part “ DO YOU WANT TO PLAY NEXT ” The mother scream and run as fast as she could forgetting about her daughter.The daughter was never found. I bet that oliver was the next player.” “O MY GOD THAT'S HORRIBLE I THINK I'M GOING TO HAVE NIGHTMARES FOR A YEAR! ” “I heard that the killer weapon used a conventional toy but welllll it a presumably I have” “STOP IT AND I DOUBT THAT IT GOIN HAPPENED TWICE AND YOU HAVE A JOB TO INTERROGATE OLIVER GIRLFRIEND TOMORROW SO BYE!’’ Chardly text backed. “well she the frisky one if i must so myself” Willison mici chardly text in a childish way.
ReplyDeleteIt was a dark night when two boys named Harry and Ron were walking in to there houses. Then Ron saw the forbidden forest and said lets go. But Harry was skeptical about going. As they were walking deeper and deeper into the forest they were flabbergasted at the size of it. Harry said "I mean how the hell is there such a big Forrest in the middle of the city". Harry shrugged and gave a deteriorating look to Ron. Right after that they found out that they were lost. They were so petrified that they started running and eventually they ran into a Deteriorating house which freaked them out even more. It looked haunted but when they went in they found a weird looking car inside. The car looked like it had endured many years. Then they found a map which they followed and they got out of the forest and finally went home.
ReplyDeleteThe Forest
ReplyDeleteFor many years, kids have been playing this game, the game is played by 2 people going into “ the suicide forest” and who ever can survive the longest without being a wimp, wins.
The forest got it’s name because that place wasn’t always a forest, but was once a neighborhood. That wasn’t just any neighborhood, but a neighborhood where crazy people lived, at least twice a year some family died somehow, the houses began to degrade as the years went by, until there was only one house left standing. That house is called the “Spirit House” because many people believe that all of the spirits of the people who have died go to that house, that’s why it is still standing, but barely. Other people just think that’s just a myth and that the house is deteriorated.
One day 4 friends decided to play the game, their names were Sam, Grian, Taurtis, and Rowan. Sam and Grian were going to spend the night first. They went inside into the forest and started walking.
“We have been walking forever!” Whined Sam
“We have been walking for 10 minutes only” yelled Grian
“Well it feels like forever, look can’t we just go sit somewhere” said Sam
“Do you really want to do that, look...that can’t be, THE SPIRIT HOUSE!” screamed Grian
“Don’t be a wimp dude, i don’t believe that” said Sam being skeptical
The boys walked closer to the house, observing it, inside was pitch black and it looked all worn out, not at all endurable.
Sam then went in
“NO!! Sam, where are you going” yelled Grian
“I’m going to check this place out” yelled Sam back
“WAIT SAM NO COME BACK HERE, IT’S NOT SAFE!” screamed Grian with all his might
Grian ran after Sam, not thinking twice. Sam went in and saw a little girl standing right in front of him
“Hello little girl, what are you doing here” said Sam
“I can’t find my mommy” the girl replied
“Well…, then let’s go find her” Sam said nervously
The girl brought Sam into a room, where he almost fainted. The room was filled with hanging people, everywhere. Sam was flabbergasted. When Sam turned around he saw that the little girl had fangs, claws and looked like a monster. The next thing Sam saw...was darkness and Grian heard a scream.
“AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH”
“SAM, SAM WHERE ARE YOU.” Grian yelled desperately
When grian walked into the room, Grian began to cry seeing his friend dead and the ground, Grian came out running from the house and out of the forest. Where all of the spirits were left alone once again.
Great story and use of words
DeleteThe Abandoned House
ReplyDeleteOne night, 4 kids was walking on the sidewalk. Then they saw a creepy, abandoned, and endured house. The boys went inside but one of the 4 was worried something bad would happen. He felt skeptical when they were exploring the dark house. Then they heard something weird. The 3 boys were curious to see what was it but the other boy was scared. The boy was hiding behind all three boys and wanted to leave. When they went downstairs, the boy realized that their priority was to explore the whole house. When walking down the stairs, the boy in the front fell and was injured. The boys contributed to help him. The 3 boys helped him but made his bruise a little degraded. The 4 boys never went to that house again and they've forgotten about the house again.
P.S/I.S 102Q Jasmine Gonzalez
ReplyDelete6-311 Mar 2,2016
Not So Scary
“Oh my lanta!,” shouted Miranda as her and DJ walked past the degrading house. “The house is losing pieces of the roof and look how old the house looks,” DJ told Miranda. “Maybe someone died here and they left the house alone so it started to get old,” Miranda said. DJ was skeptical on why the house looked like that. Then the girls heard a weird noise that scared them, so they went running home. A few days later the girls passed the house again “Okay that is it let's find out if someone lives here,” disclaimed Miranda. “No what if something bad is in there,” DJ told Miranda. “ Come on let's knock if no one answers then we leave okay,” said Miranda. Then the girls knocked on the door and suddenly the door started to squeak. The door was opened wide. “Oh well hello there little girls,” said an old lady. “Thank goodness,” whispered DJ to Miranda. The old lady invited Miranda and DJ inside for some tea. When Miranda and DJ had a great idea. Few months later, “So what do you think Ms.Hills,” said DJ. “Oh I love it it's so colossal and beautiful thank you,” Said the old lady (Ms.Hills). “Miranda and DJ thank you for making my old house to this beautiful house again,” Ms.Hills said thankfully.
An adventurer enters a house that looks like it has been taking a toll. As he explores the house, he was really hungry, so he tries to find any food that will help. He kept searching and searching, he gave up and was skeptical to find any food at this point. He then enters this one room that was haunted unlike the others. The door shuts on him and there was a colossal spider that attacked him, he didn't find escape. In the end, no one knew the man's fate.
ReplyDeleteP.S/I.S102Q Esmeralda Jerez
ReplyDelete6-311 3/2/16
The Day of Nightmares
There once was a house that endured for hundreds of years. But, until one day came a big storm and it went straight for the house! It started to degrade the house every second! The next day the house was deteriorated, the windows were shattered, the roof was tolled, and now the people who were surrounded around the house were being skeptical because nobody new if the people who lived inside the house were still alive. Luckily the people were okay. Now over the months they were trying to contribute some money so they can buy a new house to live in. Right now it is their priority to get the money they need to get a new house. Later over the years they achieved of raising money a buying a new prosperous house. The dazzeling sun light brightened their happy faces up, they reached their destiny.
Ms. Arlequin said that you can't put tolled/ toll as a verb
DeleteThe Trip
ReplyDelete“Come on, come on! Get up! Time to go!” Dad yelled. Ugh, Terra thought as she got out of her warm bed. Great, another boring family trip to who knows where except that it's going to be boring. Just thinking about where they would go and what they were going to do there made Terra feel despair of enjoying her summer vacation, but it was her parents priority to have what they so called “family time”. Let's just get this over with, let me see if I can survive of the burdensome again, she thought, rolled her eyes, then she changed, packed up and headed to the car where her brother, who was the same age as her, was coming out of the front door, with his phone in hand.
“This is going to be the worst trip yet” David, Terra’s brother said. “Isn’t it always?” Terra answered, “are you sure that this is THE WORST trip out of all the ones we so far survived through?” “I heard that we are going to- an old and deteriorated house” David answered as they got into the car and were waiting for Mom and Dad. “WHAT?!” Terra yelled, more then she tended to and right when their parents were opening the front car door. “What- what happened Terra?! Are you ok?! D-do you need a glass of water?!” Her dad stammered, “Uh, yeah, she’s ok dad, she-was- just-um-I mean, she saw that, um, Ariana Grande followed her on facebook!”David answered quickly “Yeah, she was just so excited, right Terra?” David elbowed Terra. “Um, yeah, o-of course, David is totally right, I just got excited and well, yeah, I’m ok.” Terra smiled when she finished. For a second her mom and dad had a skeptical face and didn’t buy it, but then it washed away with a smile, “Well then, I am happy to see you happy. As they say today, let's hit the road!” Dad said gleefully, “Dad,”Terra said looking at the screen of her phone, “no one say’s ‘let's hit the road’ anymore”. But her dad ignored her and started the car and their long journey began.
“We’re here! Come on out everybody!” Dad yelled, “Ah yes, this is lovely, Terra, David, come out dears!” Mom called. “Coming!”Terra yelled “Man you were right about this trip David, well at least the part of being boring” Terra whispered to her brother. “Am I not always right, my dear Terra?” answered David with an imitation of mom, Terra just rolled her eyes and walked where Mom and Dad were.
When Terra laid eyes on what Mom and Dad were commenting on, she discovered that David was entirely right about this trip! And Terra got pretty mad “Dad, we drove through ONE HOUR AND THIRTY MINUTES, JUST TO SEE AN OLD DETERIORATED HOUSE?!”. Dad tried to degrade her temper “Well Terra, you haven’t seen the inside and in addition, look at the beautiful gardens and the colossal, irregular shape of the house! There’s more! This isn’t just a house, it's a colonist's house! See that american flag at the left? And I was thinking that maybe, we can stay over the night, you know, look at the stars and sleep here, but well I don’t know, if you guys want to go home again, but there’s a lot of traffic now, so…”Dad said. “Well it sure did endure” David said. Terra was calmed down now, she did love history though “Totally Dad, we can stay, but please, next time or whenever we go somewhere tell us, so, I mostly, don’t get this mad. Promise?” Dad and Mom nodded. “Well what are we waiting for? The colonists aren’t going to come out and invite us, now are they?” They all cracked up and went inside...
I can't find mine so here it is again :D
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ReplyDeleteMission Accomplished (Part 1)
ReplyDelete"Luuuuuuuccccccy!!!" yelled Natsu impatiently.
"Natsu, be patient. Young and beautiful ladies should take their time." said Hibiki calmly while striking a pose.
"I'm ready. So what do you guys think?" asked Lucy as she spun around in a circle to show the boys, plus Erza how she looked.
Natsu and Gray deadpanned as the boys of the guild, Blue Pegasus complimented Lucy.
"Why would you wear that? We're on a mission to stop the Oracion Seis from getting the lacrimas. Not to a beauty contest." said Erza.
"Right. Sorry." Lucy quickly said before making Erza mad.
Soon Lucy and the others from different guilds started their journey to find the house where the lacrima was hidden. On their journey, Natsu, Gray and Happy was complaining on how it was taking forever to find the house.
"Are we there yet?" complained Gray
"No." Erza said.
"Are we there yet!" said Happy, copying Gray.
"No." Erza said trying to not let her anger get the best of her.
"Are we ther-" Natsu said half way as Erza punched him in the stomach.
"NO!!!" screamed Erza which made most of the other guilds scared.
"Okay." Natsu said weakly as Happy and Gray laughed.
"Is that the house, Lyon?" asked Sherry as she hid behind Lyon.
"Well this house isn't preserved." Jura stated as the rest studied it.
Without thinking, Natsu rushed into the house. Everyone tried to hold back Erza from trying to kill Natsu for rushing ahead without a plan to follow. Hibiki, Ren, and Eve tried to gather all the information they can get with Hibiki's Archive Magic. Meanwhile, Natsu, Jura, Erza, Lyon, Sherry, Lucy, Wendy, Ichiya, Gray, Happy, and Carla split up to find the lacrimas inside the house.
"AAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHH!!!!" screamed Hibiki, Eve, and Ren.
Mission Accomplished (Part 2)
ReplyDelete"Huh?!" Erza says as she senses a lot of magic energy from outside.
She gets Natsu and Gray to see what's outside with her. When they get outside, they see the Oracion Seis standing there waiting for them.
"Wow. They really took a toll on those three," Gray said as Natsu was getting ready to fight.
"I'm all fired up!" Natsu screams as he rushes towards the Oracion Seis with Erza and Gray.
Everyone else heard crashing and explosions outside and went to check it out. Wendy, Ichiya, Carla, and Happy were trying to heal Hibiki, Ren, and Eve while the others went off to help Gray, Natsu, and Erza .
"Great! You guys are just hogging all the fun for yourself," Lyon complained as Sherry looks at him with dreamy heart eyes.
"Wendy." Zero says, as he and the Oracion Seis were fighting Natsu and the others.
"Grab Wendy, the little girl with the blue hair. All we need is her, now." Zero commands as Angel, Racer, Cobra, Hoteye, and Midnight were confused.
"I thought our top priority was the lacrimas." Midnight stated as everyone else agreed.
"Change of plans. Now go! Grab her!" commanded Zero as he was annoyed of being questioned.
Racer uses his speed magic and grabbed Wendy, while Zero casted a vanishing spell.
"Wendy!!!" everyone yelled.
Mission Accomplished (Part 3)
ReplyDeleteEveryone started to split up and look for Wendy. Natsu was with Happy and Erza while Gray was with Lyon and Sherry. That just leaves Jura, Carla and Ichiya. Each group spreads out to look for Wendy. But they didn't know that the Oracion Seis was just back at the house with Wendy and hidden lacrimas.
"This must be fate, Wendy." Zero says as Wendy was tied to a poll.
"Now you shall do as we command. Or there will be consequences." said Angel.
"Racer, go scour the tomb in that pile of junk we used to hide it." Zero commanded.
"What do you guys want from me? I have nothing you would want. So can you let me go?" Pleaded Wendy as she struggled to get free.
"All you need to do is use your support magic to revive Acnoloigia for us and we'll set you free." Zero told her all the details about their plan.
"I found it." Racer said as he came back to the others with an old looking tomb but it was durable.
"Good. I was skeptical of you do what we asked, so let's bring back old memories, shall we? Remember how Acnologia took you with him when you just wondering around the forest? He did so much for you and he even found you a guild to join. Now all we ask for you is to repay the favor of reviving him." Zero said trying to convince Wendy to do as he says.
But Wendy knew she still owed Acnologia for taking her with him and finding a guild for her to join. So she chose no other than to revive him. She felt sorry because this could cause more trouble for Natsu and the others.
"Ugh! I can't pick up Wendy's sent. Huh..... wait. I can sense her. She is close by. Erza, tell the Hibiki and the others we found Wendy." Natsu said in relief as Gray and Erza followed him while telling the others.
"Great going, Natsu. You lead us right back this old lookin' hose again." complained Gray has his fist was aiming for Natsu's jaw.
But all of a sudden, Wendy came running out of the house crying.
"I'm sorry. I'm so sorry." Wendy said as she kept on crying.
"What happened?" Erza said in confusion.
"I'm baaaacccckkkk!!!!" Acnologia says as he kicks the door open.
When all the other groups have arrived back at the old looking house, the Oracion Seis was all beat up thanks to Acnologia. Apparently, when Wendy revived him, her support magic was used for good which caused his soul to change from evil to good and him loosing his memories.
"Wendy, see. You revived him and it was a good thing. He lost his memories and now he is good. So put a smile on that little face of yours." Gray said trying to cheer Wendy up.
Everyone returned back to their guild halls and got some rest after the Magic Council's guards took the Oracion Seis to prison. Acnologia went off to travel around for a bit and thanked Wendy for reviving him. A few days later, everyone on that mission got together for a celebration of victory.
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