2. Post your story as a reply/comment to this post.
3. Then, read some (or all!) of your classmates stories and reply to their story with a comment. Remember, when we comment or give feedback we always want to start with something positive and then add some constructive criticism. Think about a helpful comment for how they could have improved their story.
November 1
ReplyDeleteIt was eerie and quiet on the day I saw that eerie spooky house. I was trying to find my painting of all my posterity would look like. Max, the school bully was rigorous and hid it in the forest in hopes I would never find it and unerring make my parents very mad at me. I was looking around the place I bumbled into a clearing that was a panorama. That’s when I found the house, it was huge and was broken. I then saw dole parts of a frame, I had to get in there, so without further ado, I ran inside.
It was dark in there, I could not see a thing, so I fumbled for the light switch. Instead I found someone’s hand, it subsequently caused me to scream. I ran and ran until I found myself inside the living room. I saw a ghost which almost caused me to scream again until I saw my painting beside him. My initiative is to get to the painting and started running away. I found a door and tried to pry it open, but it would not budge, so I smashed open the door with my shoulders. Thank goodness I had resourceful skills. But it was a dead end, I heard him coming toward me, I sighed, I wasn’t unerring enough. I could not get out of this mess, so I went into a closet and began writing this journal entry about this. Too anyone who is reading this please, tell the police, he is a danger to our soci-
“The pages ended, huh” said one of the two boys who were reading the journal that was next to the dead body. “I wonder who that ghost was” the other boy said. “He’s right behind you” someone said. The boys turned around and saw the most strict person everyone has every seen. “Old Man Jenkins” they cried, none had seen them again.
It was really interesting and scary.
ReplyDeleteNovember 4, 2015
ReplyDeleteOnce on a mysterious night, I have gone to the old house and seen ghosts and mysterious and supernatural creatures in the house. When venturing in there, the creatures are targeting me because that i might house infiltrated their house to steal the a book. I tried to be resourceful and get myself a wooden stick and attacked the creature. I fumbled the stick and now i have no weapons to deal with them. Meanwhile, I am going to take initiative to sprint and got away with the book. I escaped to my house and the creatures abandoned the house.
i wish my class did this, i could have come up with an awesome story with the books i read
ReplyDeleteLizbeth, I posted this on Edmodo for all classes- any of my students could have done this!
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