2. The majority of your word use must be our new vocabulary words. Challenge: Use multiple forms of our current vocabulary words (both verb/adjective/noun forms etc.) Bonus if you use some of our previous vocabulary words.
3. Post your story as a reply/comment to this post.
4. Then, read some (or all!) of your classmates stories and reply to their story with a comment. Remember, when we comment or give feedback we always want to start with something positive and then add some constructive criticism. Think about a helpful comment for how they could have improved their story.
The Night Of the Grand Pumpkin
ReplyDeleteA long, long time ago there was a pumpkin that only came out on october 31, he was only a small cute pumpkin until one day, the day that the humans called Halloween, the pumpkin came out. Two girls saw it and thought it was cute and gave it a lollipop, the pumpkin ate it and loved it and started stealing candy from everyone, now he comes out every night, but the scary part wasn’t that, he also started to eat other things… people usually go missing in the night and the villagers were very scared except one brave man, his dream was to slay the monster all by himself. So he went to all types of training school, finally the day that he has been waiting for.
The warrior went up toward the Grand Pumpkin Beast. “I need to apply all the skills I learned to slay this monster” he thought. The beast saw him then opened his mouth ready to swallow him, but then he stop for a moment. “Ew, is this guy really consumable? He has so much sweat and he smells, maybe I could consider putting some salt on him” the beast thought. While the beast stopped the warrior didn’t hesitate , he swung his sword and the beast was sliced in half. The warrior couldn’t believe it, people say that slaying the beast was unachieveable, but the brave warrior made it possible.
Once he achieved his goal he went back to celebrate with the people. He knew that a pumpkin that big would be a waste if he threw it out, so they celebrated with pumpkin pie, I guess it was applicable. The pumpkin slaying was so consuming the children would go out a smash free pumpkins for fun.
Very good opening paragraph. It gave some good background and set up the conflict well by setting a creepy mood.Good job incorporating vocab words as well as the suffix -able.
DeleteI think it should have a little bit more
DeleteThe Punkin Story Jocelyn chasi
ReplyDeleteOne night a little boy was walking in the forest ,he saw a big orange pumpkin. The little boy stepped inside the pumpkin to see what was inside. The boy achieved to the mouth of the pumpkin. The pumpkin had a scary face for the boy .The inside of the pumpkin had a bright yellow light that the boy couldn’t see the big seeds .Until the boy jumped into a gooey liquid . All of his clothes got so sticky that he couldn’t walk with that gooeyness . So the boy jumped again to the middle of the grand pumpkin to clean himself with a big seed . He climb and climb a lot until he got to the top of the pumpkin . So the little boy went happy of having a great adventure inside a big pumpkin .He finally got home ate his dinner and brush his teeth and then went to sleep . ‘’ What a great adventure i had today in that big grand pumpkin and one more thing good night peeps’’ said the little boy.Since that day the little boy never again saw the big pumpkin .
I like a lot of your descriptions, like gooey, but I wish there had been more vocab words. Remember, that was one of our main objectives for this activity. I don't see any words with the suffix -able.
DeleteIt was a nice story, but the picture looks like its eating someone and is alive
DeleteThe Man named Pumpkin!
ReplyDeleteThere once was a man named Pumpkin.One day,he walked home from work whistling like a dwarf from Snow White at 12am in the morning.....until....he saw....a Gigantic Pumpkin!Pumpkin started running as fast as he could away from the Gigantic Pumpkin.The Gigantic Pumpkin picked Pumpkin up,and consumed him all the way down his throat..........which he doesn't have.Pumpkin was living in a Pumpkin!Pumpkin lived in the Gigantic Pumpkin for 16 years.Until he noticed a shining light through the Pumpkins eyes.Was it......a unicorn?!And rainbows?!And short Irish leprechauns!?He loved all of those things so very much and he wanted to see everything.So Pumpkin applied all his strength to it and pulled out the Gigantic Pumpkins teeth!Pumpkin got out of the Pumpkin!Pumpkin achieved his goal of escaping from the Pumpkin and had a pet unicorn,went through a rainbow and made friends with the leprechauns.........who murdered him and made Pumpkin die.THE END!
Sorry,Class 6-301.I don't think I put my name in for my story but the story of the man named Pumpkin was made by me,Kyra Siahaan
ReplyDeleteThe grand pumpkin story
DeleteOnce, Greg was walking around the woods, suddenly a Grand pumpkin came and Greg got an diamond sword and applied his skills to the test. Greg failed and got consumed by the grand pumpkin.When he is in , he saw a villager who fought and got eaten. They both consider each other and starts to slay the insides but the villager felt envious because he is in later than the villager but either way, they slayed the grand pumpkin and escaped.
Whose story is this?
DeleteThe Strange Candy
ReplyDeleteRay was a normal boy was walking to school. And his friend Tim ran into him and was going into his pocket.
“Ray eat this put only consume it during lunch” said mysteriously Tim.
“ok” unsure said ray.
Tim saw a group of school mates and ran to them. Ray has the candy in his hand and unwraps and puts it into his mouth. Now in the school taking his spanish class Ray is not feeling well Ray and raises his hand.
“Can I go to the bathroom Mrs.Garcia” said Ray.
“You may go just sign out” said Mrs. Garcia.
Ray walks into the bathroom and when he reaches to the sink something happens Ray sees a light behind him and turns around and found nothing then he realized it was him.
“What's happening to me !” afraidly Ray said.
Ray then was teleported into a very queer world. And then ray feels a hand on his stomach and turns around to see a very grand pumpkin man.
“I am the great Pumpkin king and i will consume you” Pumkin King said menacingly
“What” scaredly said ray.
Trying to apply his strength into trying to release himself but he was going to be consumed. But he tried when he reached his teeth and was able to lift the teeth and he jumped out into a nearby forest and when he ran in deeper he saw a portal and jumped in and he woke up in his bed and checked the calender and it was the same day then he realized he was dreaming.
I like some of your descriptive word choices, like menacingly. That's a great adverb for the Pumpkin King. I also like the creativity of making a Pumpkin King character,
DeleteNext time, try to use more vocabulary words- there's only a few.
Kanastasya’s Adventure to Queer Pumpkin Land (By: Selinna Lin)
ReplyDelete“Oh no! Where am I?” Kanastasya whispered to herself, nervously. She is now surrounded by so many weird, enormous pumpkins, she couldn’t even count how many there were!
“Grahhh! Yumm, eat her, my little pumpkins!” Yelled the biggest pumpkin out of all the others.
Kanastasya ran as all the pumpkins chased her. “OMG! I must be dreaming this, at least I hope so!”
Before she knew it, there was a tree in front of her with a small, hollow hole. She didn’t had time to consider anything, so she dived into the hole. The pumpkins were too huge to fit into the hole so they surrounded the tree and waited for the meek, little girl to come out.
Suddenly, Kanastasya heard a voice that came out of nowhere. It told her, “The only way you could get out of this weird pumpkin land, is to get the keys in the pumpkin king’s mouth. Hold the brown, old key and say the magical words: “Pumpkin, pumpkin, disappear!”
Then, the voice disappeared.
“Who are you?” Kanastasya yelled into air, but there was no reply.
She had a really strong will to get out of this queer land so she decided to give it a try.
The pumpkin king must be the largest pumpkin out of all. Since when it ordered to eat me, all the pumpkins obeyed, Kanastasya thought to herself.
She ran out of the hole and dashed for the largest pumpkin, thinking she must achieve her goal. She raced into the pumpkin’s mouth when it gasped. Inside the mouth, she found a key chain. It had four different keys: gold, silver, bronze, and there it is, a brown and looking very old key. Kanastasya thought no more, she hold the brown, old key and yelled “Pumpkin, pumpkin, disappear!”
All of a sudden, she found her mom waking her up. Kanastasya noticed it was all a dream. But then, she felt it, the four keys on a broken key chain.
The grand pumpkin story
ReplyDeleteOnce, Greg was walking around the woods, suddenly a Grand pumpkin came and Greg got an diamond sword and applied his skills to the test. Greg failed and got consumed by the grand pumpkin.When he is in , he saw a villager who fought and got eaten. They both consider each other and starts to slay the insides but the villager felt envious because he is in later than the villager but either way, they slayed the grand pumpkin and escaped.
At one day, a boy named Sky was in walking. Suddenly, he see a sign and another one and another one. On one of the sign, it said “Welcome and happy Halloween!” Oh, I didn’t realized that, Sky thought. He follow it wondering what will lead him to. After 1 hour later, he arrived at a random ocean. He saw a small island in the middle of the ocean. 1 hour later… Sky is now on the small island but there was something strange about it. He take a little closer to see what that light is. Now, he see a pumpkin and some more. Suddenly, he heard them talk, Sky quickly hide behind a tree that was next to him. “I am the grand pumpkin. We have achieve our goal, the great army of pumpkins. We have captured a player (in the game). MA HA HA HA HA HA!” the grand pumpkin said. How can a pumpkin talk and I rather say the dumb army of pumpkins? Sky thought. Suddenly, he saw a player or a person. It was his friend, Jason! What in the world Jason is doing and I wonder how he was capture by those useless pumpkins? Sky thought. “Ow!” Sky yelled. As the grand pumpkin turn around, Sky quickly trying to stay convert, but he failed. Now, the pumpkins saw him was ready to attack him. “Watch as your friend die!” the grand pumpkin said and the pumpkin ate Jason. He saw Jason being shrink and the pumpkin was trying to bite him with his teeth while Jason is trying to not getting kill, but he failed. Sky was so mad that he take his sword and slash his way through the army of pumpkin. After the whole army has die, he take his sword and stab the grand pumpkin on his head and Sky left. “I… will… get…y” the pumpkin try to say his full sentence but he die before he could finish his sentence.
ReplyDeleteThe warriors who fought the super pumpkin by Bryan Disla
ReplyDeleteIt was Halloween night that my told me the tale of how my great grandpa was slayed and the random giant pumpkin that blocks the town's gateway every October. It was about my grandpa as he was a brave warrior who was going to slay the pumpkin but his considerable wife said that he should not go.He stood but his idea comsumed him so much that he snuck off to fight the pumpkin.when he got theirthe pumpkin Roared at him. it was a epic battle of sword and flames.In the end the pumpkin won that fight and my grandpa was consumed. alI was left of him was his sword.I was firous after hearing this.Later while everyone was asleep i took my grandpa blade, my fathers hunting rifle and my uncles tons of c4(fun fact i am related to deadpool so that is cool but he found out what i was doing so he came along).My uncle took me using his car.when we got to the pumpkin we crashed it in his mouth and the pumpkin ate it.I shot a tooth lose and used the sword to fully take the tooth out.The c4 was going to blow up but the my uncle teleport me out.Killing the pumpkin was maybe a bad idea because now their some orc and monster slaying to do
The warriors who fought the super pumpkin by Bryan Disla
ReplyDeleteIt was Halloween night that my told me the tale of how my great grandpa was slayed and the random giant pumpkin that blocks the town's gateway every October. It was about my grandpa as he was a brave warrior who was going to slay the pumpkin but his considerable wife said that he should not go.He stood but his idea comsumed him so much that he snuck off to fight the pumpkin.when he got theirthe pumpkin Roared at him. it was a epic battle of sword and flames.In the end the pumpkin won that fight and my grandpa was consumed. alI was left of him was his sword.I was firous after hearing this.Later while everyone was asleep i took my grandpa blade, my fathers hunting rifle and my uncles tons of c4(fun fact i am related to deadpool so that is cool but he found out what i was doing so he came along).My uncle took me using his car.when we got to the pumpkin we crashed it in his mouth and the pumpkin ate it.I shot a tooth lose and used the sword to fully take the tooth out.The c4 was going to blow up but the my uncle teleport me out.Killing the pumpkin was maybe a bad idea because now their some orc and monster slaying to do
I loved how creative you are in the beginning, how you said that your grandfather fought the giant pumpkin!
DeleteI love this story its cool
DeleteElijah Mejill The night of the living pumpkin There was a man named Jack.He had loved halloween when it was 5 days away.He went to party city to buy pumpkins he wanted 6 pumpkins ,but they only had 5 so bought the 5 pumpkins and left.then jack was on his way back home when he found a pumpkin it didnt look like it was new it look old ,but not rotten so he took it. So he goes home and then he starts to carve the pumpkins all 6 of them,but the last one had skinny eyebrows big eyes and lit up from the inside.
ReplyDeleteThe minute the pumpkin started talking jack had said that he is a ghost that wakes up every 5 days before halloween. He also told him that “im am here to kill you and i cant live in a real body NOBODY CAN!So the pumpkin shrinked jack to the size of a pencil then the pumpkin chased him in jacks little cousin’s toy car .So jack ran s fast as he could so he cant get run over then jack stood on top his dinning table and jumped on to the car and stabbed him with a small pocket knife,but it only slowed him down a little. when the ghost put jack in his teeth to squash him,but jack got some type of power to cut in half the pumpkin .then he was tall again and the next day he hangout with his friends on halloween and weared a superman costume.
Then next year 5 days before halloween a little boy picks up a pumpkin and takes it home,but that pumpkin had the soul of the pumpkins big bad brother in it so then the mother and the little boy was never found again and this story keeps on every year once again
The Giant Pumpkin of Terror
ReplyDeleteIt was a dark and Halloween night, Jacob and Samantha both were walking closely together, holding hands, wearing the same costumes, and staring at each other every 2 seconds. Then suddenly Jacob says to Samantha " Hey what's that big pumpkin doing there? And who put it there?". Samantha reply's " Idk but it's really creepy though.....". At that moment Jacob was actually envious because his pumpkin carving wasn't that great. Samantha in the other hand wanted to go in the pumpkin to see how its lighting up. Jacob considered not going in there because he was really frightened and creeped out.
Samantha runs to the pumpkin and stand in front of it for a second and then she heard , " SAMANTHA DON'T GO IN THERE!!! IT CAN BE DANGEROUS! STOP!!!" screamed Jacob, but Samantha wanted to achieve her goal, which was to go in the pumpkin to see how its lighting up and how big is it really looking at it so close. So in 3....2....1!!!! SHE WENT IN!!!!!! "SAMANTHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" screamed Jacob. Jacob ran as fast as he can and as soon as he got right in font of the pumpkin he jumped right in it.
1 month later Jacob or Samantha were never seen again. And on the next Halloween all the army gang and police officer of the city came to the pumpkin and shot guns and threw knifes and finally killed the Big Grande Pumpkin Beast!
u have a prosperous essay
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DeleteBeautiful!!!!!!!
Deletethe mysterious and grand pumpkin
ReplyDeleteone halloween night in the year of 1979 . It is about time where the childrens are gonna start going trick or treating . But then there is a live pumpkin sitting there looking creepy .Half an hour later the childrens buckets are full of candy and the pumpkin feels envious of what the childrens have in their baskets but he don't . So the pumpkin have a grand idea of eating one of the kids and then he would also have his or her basket full of candy . He consumes that his idea would be very successful and that he would achieve it. He waited and waited for someone to come by until one boy finally came .
The pumpkin finally waited for the right time to eat the boy . And he ate the boy and got a basket full of candy . But when the mother of the boy found out that her son was missing it she considered the pumpkin as a kidnapper .
Then when the sister found out she left to find another pumpkin that was lurking and waiting for a kid to come by and be eaten. But when the sister found out that all the pumpkin were like that it was to late because everyone that went trick or treating was eating and she was the only human left alive.
She had to make a terrible decision it was either die or find a way to survive...
All that was a dream and she thought it was just a fanciful place that was not enchanting at all . she then went to each room in her house to see that everyone was alive and she looked at her pumpkins and saw that it was not alive.
She told her brother of the scary dream and the brother said " i had the same dream". so it was like they were reading each others mind while sleeping.They saw that it wasn't real so they went back to sleep and lived peacefully after all.
I loved your story because you created a year to let use know when the story is happening!
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DeleteP/I.S102Q Zainab Khan
ReplyDelete6-311 11-10-15
The Fairy And The Pumpkin
There once was a prosperous man who once got stuck in a pumpkin. I now will tell his story from the day before halloween.
It was a sunny morning when Carsten woke up and went to town where he found a meek and grand fairy. She was applying her skills on many variety of objects. The skill that she was applying was turning the objects into pumpkins. But in one of her spells she reversed the spells and turned a building into a talking pumpkin. Then after that mishap she was so careless that her wand flew into the pumpkin’s mouth. Carsten was the only one who was brave enough to go in and get it. After he came out he became man of the year for his courage and bravery.
Cool!!
DeleteBob life changed during the night of halloween. Bob was in prison and he tried to escape every year before the night of halloween.
ReplyDeleteMy cell mate christian agreed to do it with me this year. the guard took us out and we talked about how to make a considerable plan to escape. I Lurked the paper under my torn shirt.
They brought us back forcefully into the cell. We crept into the corner of the cell to talk to each other privately.
"hey what is the plan again" christian asked."we have to make someone distract the guards."Bob said."Oh now i get it" Christian said.
Hours passed in the cells and know we are ready to escape the cell. The guard came to my cell and putted the keys in there. The guard got distracted and bob unlocked his cell and christian's. The guard came and started chasing them.
They ran through the hallway to escape but they were in a dead end. They started fighting the guards but they were knocked down many times. They used there force to knock them down .
They escaped the guards and then ran back to the hallway. They came upon this potion which lets u the power to shrink. they both drank the potion and shrank in .2 seconds. They had the power to run really fast until they came upon this jack-o-lantern. There considerable plan worked out but they have to travel inside the pumpkin. They went to a fanciful place of New York City
One scary dark night a scientist was in his lab making some monsters that he could control for a achievable goal but something went wrong the grand jack-o-lantern escaped. It was not good because it was made as a consumable monster.When he went to his board there was no board only a grand consumable monster.He forgot to apply the control collar to take over the monster.
ReplyDeletethis doesn't make much sense and it doesn't have your name on it, and you only used two vocabulary words
DeleteWho is this??
DeleteThe war of Pumpkins
ReplyDeleteOne Saturday afternoon, Mark was getting ready to go to his sister’s house in Madison.
He was going to his sister’s house for Halloween,and invited Mark to go because she applied many special liquids to make an invention.
Soon he has arrived at her house. he saw that there was going to be a storm approaching. As soon as he got in Sasha’s (sister) house she had told him that there was a huge problem.
“Are you insane?” said Mark
“Ummm,I don’t understand what happen everything was perfectly fine!”said Sasha.
Sasha started to lurk all around the room of thinking what to do next. She made an evil pumpkin and she went to far, that the pumpkin became huge like a monster, the pumpkin escaped and went to destroy the city.
“What are we going to do?” said Mark
“Wait!, if only we can get inside the pumpkin and try to unplug it and stop everything” says Sasha
War has just started when they arrived at the city. The only way to stop it was to unplug the pumpkin. They headed toward the pumpkin and they saw people screaming, babies crying, people getting stuck, and buildings crashing.
“OK, i’ve got a plan just follow my lead” said Sasha
“ok” said Mark frightened.
They were chasing the pumpkin. Mark had a thought in his head he was sad because he didn’t want the poor dazzling city to get destroyed. Now all Mark could think of is how is it possible to achieve this goal.
One hour later…..
“Yaaaaaay we did” said Sasha as she unplugged
They finally unplugged the pumpkin. Mark and Sasha have saved the day. Sasha said that she wasn’t going to make anymore invention
Julissa Gomez 6-311
Nice Job Juli!!!!!
DeleteThe shrink ray
ReplyDeleteOne Friday morning Bob and Amanda were in the schools science lab. On Saturday it would be Halloween. Bob and Amanda were finishing up their science project, which was a shrink ray. They were so excited for this final touch. “Should we test it out first?”Said Amanda, “Sure let’s try it on this apple!”Bob said. After testing it they said together “WHAT A SUCSSES!!!!!!” They decided that if they want to get more candy on Halloween they were going to shrink themselves so they could lurk into people’s houses and steal their candy. “Are you thinking what I’m thinking? Let’s do it!”
With excitement they took the shrink ray home and so that way tomorrow they could shrink themselves. The next morning Bob and Amanda woke up lightning quick. They realized they had to wait till noon to go trick or treating. So in the meanwhile they started shrinking other things to test it out. Finally noon came. “Ready Amanda?” “Yep but dress in all black so we could blend in with everything!” They got ready and started to shrink themselves.
“Ok ready to go get some candy?” “YES LET’S GO NOW!!!!!!!!” So they went off. They didn’t consider that the effects might wear off. But they still went with it. They approached many houses as they walked. The last house they approached had a nice pumpkin that looked gigantic. They were dazzled by how big it was. All of a sudden the pumpkin moved and looked at Bob and Amanda. They were scared so they tried running away but somehow the pumpkin grabbed Amanda. “AMANDA!!!!!!!”Bob had said. He was puzzled of what to do right now. The pumpkin had put Amanda into the mouth. Bob finally came to a conclusion. He was willing to risk is life to go save Amanda. So slowly entering the pumpkins mouth he got inside the mouth and………………………
from class 6-311
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DeleteThe Night Of the Living Pumpkin By Jaylene Valentin
ReplyDeleteJackie was so excited for Halloween. He hopes he can get a variety of candies. “See you later, Mom! Going trick-or-treating!” Jackie said. “Wait! Are you going with you friend Kim?” Jackie’s mom asked. “Yeah, I’m going to meet her by the school” Jackie replied. “Okay. See you later, honey.” Mom said. “Okay, bye mom!”. Jackie ran out the house in a rapid manner. He couldn’t wait to trick-or-treat.
Jackie saw Kim by the school. “Kim!” Jackie yelled. Kim waved back. When Jackie approached Kim they went to the first house to the next. “Okay, almost done. Just one more house.” Kim said. When Kim And Jackie got to the last house, the owner didn’t give candy, she gave seeds. Jackie looked at Kim curiously as they received their seeds. “Well that weird.” Jackie said. “I know. Who gives seeds on Halloween?” Kim asked. “That house.” Jackie said. Jackie and Kim laughed and said goodbye after the last house.
“Mom, I’m home!” Jackie yelled. “So, how was trick-or-treating?” Mom said. “It was fun. I got a lot of candy. But the last house was queer.” Jackie replied. “How was it queer?” Mom asked. “Well, the last house gave me and Kim seeds. I don’t know what for.” Jackie said. “Maybe tomorrow you can plant the seeds and see what you get. Okay? Now go get ready for bed, good night”. Mom said. “Good night”. Jackie replied. Jackie went up to his room to get ready for bed. In bed, Jackie was so consumed about the seeds he couldn’t fall asleep. He didn’t know what those seeds could lead to. It will remain a mystery until tomorrow.
In the morning, Jackie jumped out of bed, got ready and ran downstairs, Jackie ran to the phone and called Kim over to his house to see what the seeds are. When Kim approached to Jackie’s house they ran to the backyard and planted the seeds. Right after they watered the seeds, it started to grow, bigger and bigger. The seeds were a giant pumpkin! “Woah! a giant pumpkin! Mom! Mom! The seeds were a giant pumpkin!” Jackie yelled. Mom ran out the house and was surprised of what she saw. “Oh my. we can’t have this here! It’s a gigantic pumpkin in our backyard. We will have to leave it here for now, but not too long!” Mom said. Jackie and Kim stared at the giant pumpkin. They didn’t know what to do. Kim left and the town went to bed. The moonlight shined on the pumpkin, it began to come to life!. It has a giant face, scary looking. It broke the fence and walked all through the town. Jackie heard a loud bang. He got out of bed, looked out the window and saw a giant, terrifying pumpkin. He ran out his room and woke up his mom. “Mom! Mom! There is a moving giant pumpkin outside! It’s going through the town!
Everyone in the neighborhood got out there house and saw the pumpkin. No one didn’t know what to do. The pumpkin was breaking everything in town. It was munching on power lines and breaking houses. About fifteen people ran up to the pumpkin and tried to stop it from destroying many houses. Jackie wanted to be a hero, he ran to the pumpkin and tried to hold the pumpkin’s mouth open. “No Jackie! It’s dangerous!” jackie’s mom yelled. Her hand slipped trying to get a grip of Jackie’s hand. Many more people ran up to the pumpkin to help Jackie. Other people called for help. Firemen and policemen helped. They kept on shooting the pumpkin and trapped in in ropes. The pumpkin was destroyed! Everyone was so happy the battle between a giant pumpkin and humans was over. People returned to houses and went to bed. When Jackie and his mom went in their house Jackie’s mom had mixed emotions. “You could have gotten hurt! I was so scared!” Mom said. “I’m okay. You don’t have to worry. ” Jackie said. “Well i am happy my son helped save the town” jackie’s mom said. Jackie was very happy he helped save the town. He ran to his room to finally finish this very queer day.
Now this is a story
DeleteI agree, Perla!
DeleteNice story Jaylene
DeleteRise of the Jack-o-Lantern
ReplyDeleteA jack-o-lantern able who come alive and with glowing eyes and mouth is considered a horroible and terrifying movie, but what if it is true? Would people be running away or would they fight?
One night, on a rainy night. There was a jack-o-lantern thrown away by a kid named Jake. It was Halloween yesterday. A few days later. The jack-o-lantern disappeared! " Hey mom, have you seen the jack-o-lantern I mad for Halloween?" said Jake. " No. Why?" said mom. " I left it somewhere in the grass in the backyard. Suddenly, a gaint shake in the ground occurred. It grew louder and stronger. Every stomp. Everything bounce into the air. A gaint jack-o-lantern appeared. It roared scaring everyone in town. But then the president showed up and spoke. They made a deal that the jack-o-lantern will stop attacking and will be returned back to Jake.
The Night Of The Giant Pumpkin
ReplyDeleteOne halloween day, Dave went to a grand mall to buy candy for trick or treaters, he bought enough candy for a improper halloween holiday. He also went to the pumpkin shop to buy 6 pumpkins. He only bought 5 because they were the only left.
So while walking home, he saw a pumpkin just sitting in the sidewalk and Dave said "Why is this pumpkin in the sidewalk?" So he just took it, when he got home, he put all of his candy on a huge bowl for tons of trick or treaters that are gonna get candy. Then he carved the pumpkins into scary faces so that he could make it as a decoration for his door. When he started to carve the last pumpkin, he considered not to because he realized that its different from the others. Then the pumpkin became giant and said "I'm gonna eat you!!!" The pumpkin grabbed Dave and tried to eat him. Dave said "You shall not eat me!!!" He used his body to hold his mouth from closing. He quickly escaped and killed the Giant Pumpkin. Dave said "Phew, that was close... i'm not celebrating halloween anymore.
The Jeff Story
ReplyDeleteThere was a man named jeff who was making dinner.He noticed a weird figure outside his house.it was a huge pumpkin!!!!Jeff called the police as fast as he could.but it wasn't enough.The pumpkin destroyed his home and found Jeff whimpering in a corner.The pumpkin says
"Hello there Jeff"the pumpkin yelled
"how do you know me"Jeff asked
"Jeff.I am your father,ha im just kidding!Im not your father but you do look very consumable so i guess i might as well eat you.have any last words?"
"Can i listen to Justin Bieber as i die,because i really like listening to his-
"muahahahahahhahaha"The pumpkin growled
the pumpkin felt something poking his chest.he opens his mouth to continue eating ,but Jeff breaks through him by cutting his skin using a Justin beiber mixtape he had in his pocket.but it wasn't enough.Jeff was pushing the Pumpkins mouth for his life!!!!
The mouth closes.But wait what is that?Jeff is still alive he had put a dummy inside the pumpkin's mouth!The pumpkin gives up and goes to eat somebody else.
ReplyDeleteJacob was envious of caleb’s grand pumpkin, it was bigger than him.
On halloween night something strange happened that night, the pumpkin grew more GRAND that it seemed like jacob was only 1 inch against the pumpkin.
Jacob then climbed onto the grand pumpkin mouth it looked like the grand pumpkin was going to consume him. Something more fanciful happened the grand pumpkin had consumed jacob and started moving.
Then jacob tried to consume an idea to get out of the grand pumpkin, But it was USELESS.
Jacob just needed to apply his imagination because we all know pumpkins can’t move even if they tried to.
he considered taking out his plastic knife from his costume he carved out a triangle.
Knowing that he achieved the goal he will always consider the grand pumpkin legend to be true.
Nice job Nicole!
DeleteI love yours!!!!!
DeleteThe Pumkin Accident
ReplyDeleteIn the scientist lab the scientist told Max “You first need to apply this tan to make yourself grow bigger.” Max was very envious that his friends had segways, so when he saw this ad to do the experiment, he considered the stakes and then joined. “Now all you have to do is wait here while I start the machine” said the man, “this will be so grand.” he then went into a room. The machine started glowing and glowing and Max started to think what he would achieve from this when suddenly bang.
He looked and saw everything was bigger and then realized that he was tiny, he was suprised and was a little afraid. The scientist came back, “oh no, there has been an accident, it has made you small, I will try and find a way to cure you.” and hurried off. Max looked around and saw a giant pumkin on the other side of the room, he decided to eat it to calm himself down and hopped on its teeth and started to consume it.
He was busy eating the pumkin when the scientist came back with a strange machine, “it will help you grow” and aimed it at him. The problem was, Max was in the pumkin so when the man shot, it hit the pumkin and it grew and grew and broke out of the house. Everyone saw it and talked about it and then 2 people were on the news around the world. Now there is a giant pumkin and the scientist and Max are famous. Now Max buys the segway and is the coolest kid ever.
Pumpkins Talk by Lizbeth Diaz
ReplyDeleteAlex watched as his brother Simon mixed different chemicals together.
“What are you making?” he asked
“A potion that could grow the size of anything” replied Simon
“Cool, planning to make Hershey’s grow ten times the size they are?” joked Alex. Simon scowled at him and returned back to applying different chemicals to his potion
“Its for the Science Fair, it will be sure to win and will be my greatest achievement” said Simon proudly
“Oh will then, guess i have a shot if last place with my brain” said Alex as he zoomed in closer to Simon.
“And…...done!, now all i need to do is test it!” exclaimed Simon
“I want to try it on my pumpkin!” said Alex and he took the potion to his room and poured it all on his pumpkin.
“Alex, you poured too much and now i need to make the potion again!” said Simon
“Relax, i’ll just throw out the Pumpkin and help you with making your potion again, i watched you make plenty of potions, i got your back” said Alex. Simon considered this for a moment.
“Fine, but you better not mess it up again” he said. Alex threw out the pumpkin and went to help Simon. But little did he know that the pumpkin would come to life and grow and grand.
After Alex helped Simon with the potion, they went out to eat at a diner. As they ate they heard screaming coming from outside and a booming voice.
“What’s going on out there?” asked Simon
“Let’s go check it out” said Alex. When they went outside, they saw a giant pumpkin eating people shouting Alex.
“ALEX, ALEX!!” the pumpkin said furiously and then he spotted Alex and headed right towards him.
“Why are you mad at me!” yelled Alex
“Because you never paid attention to me, i spent years on your desk and you acted like i wasn’t even there!” the pumpkin replied
“Woah, pumpkins really do talk” said Alex
“And have feelings” added Simon and then he remembered.
“Wait, i created another potion that can turn this pumpkin back to normal, you distract him” said Simon.
“Ok” replied Alex. Unfortunately, Alex ended up trying not to get eaten as he held the pumpkin’s mouth open as Simon came back.
“Are you okay?” asked Simon
“Look at my position Simon, do i look okay?” replied Alex and with that, Simon threw the potion at the Pumpkin and it shrunk to its normal size. Alex decided to burn the pumpkin and throw it away and he and Simon never spoke of it again.
This one is funny and good
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DeleteI thought of a better one but i already posted this one
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ReplyDeleteOne night before Halloween, Sarah was finishing her science project. She was doing a shrinking machine and supposed to be testing it on someone, but she doesn't know who. She decided to think that later and just focus on doing her shrinking machine. She told her mom," Can I go to my friend house to achieve on finishing my machine." My mom said," No because you're grounded until tomorrow." Sarah was so furious because the science project was due tomorrow on Halloween.
Sarah considered on shrinking her mom because she didn't let her go to her friend's house. She thought it was a grand plan, but she didn't care. She finished her project late night, so she had to shrink her mom tomorrow. On Halloween, Sarah woke up early to shrink her mom when she was still sleeping. By the time her mom woke up, her mom was so surprised because she was too petite. Sarah put her in her book bag to bring her to school, but her mom got away. Her mom hid inside a jack-o-lantern. Her mom didn't want anybody to see her so petite. Sarah didn't know she got away because she was thinking about what a prosperous job she was doing.
When she got to school, she found out that her mom was not in there. so, she used a apple to show that it actually worked. Sarah did a prosperous job on the project and got a good grade. On the way home, Sarah was trying to find her mom all over the place, but couldn't find her. She decided to stop looking for her and live without a mom. She was also happy to do that, so she could do anything she wants to do without getting in trouble.
But what happened to the mom then?
DeleteHazel Fan 6-311 The Pumpkin King
ReplyDeleteOnce upon a time there was a man named Micheal, he was a doctor. One day Micheal was helping a patient called Emily she liked Cinderella and pumpkins, Emily said that once she had a dream about a pumpkin eating a man but she didn't know who the man was.
"Wow that seems like a queer dream that I wouldn't want to be in" Micheal said
"Yeah I keep on having this dream I wonder what it means" Emily said
Micheal started to having queer dreams about the pumpkin king. The next day Micheal ended up in a dark room, but there was a huge pumpkin just like Emily's dream about the pumpkin king that eats the man. Micheal didn't know what to do so he just ran. The pumpkin wanted to consume Micheal but he didn't. Micheal had to apply his karate skills to fight the pumpkin, but the pumpkin was to strong, his karate skills couldn't even beat him. The entrance was very grand. The pumpkin considered Micheal as a shy and scared guy. Then the pumpkin ended up eating Micheal.
I really didn't get it
DeleteP.S/I.S.102q Beulah Starlin
ReplyDelete6-311 11/10/15
The night of the living tricks!!!!!!
Once upon a time peterpan was walking with his friends Jake,Izzy,Cubby,and Tinkerbell and it was one day before halloween.
Izzy says” hurry up we will get late to work on our costumes for halloween”.
Harry!!!!!!, Harry’s mom screamed come down to eat dinner.
Mom i will eat dinner later i am considering to finish this book tonight, Harry was talking to his mom while the thunder outside with the grand lightning the thunder and the lightning were making a very queer noise together.
Did you finish your Homework Harry asked mom.
Yes mom i applied the skills Ms.A thought me.
Bye i am going to work, don’t forget to eat the spaghetti and meatballs in the fridge she said taking her prosperous foot out of the door
Bye mom.
Oh mom thank god you are a late night nurse he says to himself ,i achieved goal number 6.
But i still feel envious from Niall he is in six flags enjoying himself in the fright fest.
Jake look there is a pumpkin in front of the grand dracula mansion says Tinkerbell
Can we take it home please please says Cubby.
Okay we will take it home says Jake
Ooooooooooh what will happen now says Harry in a queer voice.
The pumpkin stayed home with them
The Next morning Cubby screams in everyone’s ear Happy Halloween!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
They were getting ready to go trick or treating
They put the pumpkin outside there door.
After a while they came back the pumpkin was gone
They heard a queer noise behind them
Help ,help shouted Peter Pan stuck in the pumpkin’s mouth
HA ,HA,HA,HA halloween is all about tricks.
The Creepy Old House
ReplyDeleteOn Halloween night, when the kids were trick or treating, there was a boy named Brandon with his friend named Nia.
They had a lot of candy and they wanted to stop at the last house on the block, which was very grand where they are going to pull a prank.They say that there used to live an ugly witch there and that she the house every year on Halloween night, and the kids that go there mysteriously disappear.
“let’s go to that creepy old house now!” exclaimed Brandon
“ Are you sure about this, you know that people have disappeared there” said Nia
“ Those are just stories, let’s do this!” shouted Brandon
“ ok then” said Nia worried
They both lurked into the house. There were many spells and pumpkins that were overt.
“ so where do we set the prank?” said Brandon
“ let’s do it somewhere where it’s overt” said Nia, she applied her skills of making and watching videos about pranks to make this one just perfect. Suddenly the house began to shake and then in 2 seconds it stopped.
“ what was that?!” cried Nia
“ it was probably just the house” said Brandon so they got back to work.
The prank was something on the floor where when you step on it, it triggers something t pop out in your face. Nia had a feeling that she was being watched,so did Brandon, when they turned around an ugly green skin witch, with ripped clothes. With a flick of her magic stick she turned Brandon into a pumpkin and shrunk Nia into his mouth, Nia was able to get out but because she was to small she couldn’t lift Brandon.
Nia said “ sorry “ and left, both of them never to be seen again.
This one is short but good and good at using the vocabulary words
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ReplyDeleteThere was a poor family that were farmers,a husband, wife, and a their child is a 10 year old girl named Ashley. They lived far from a town in a cabin that was surrounded with trees that ceilinged the sky above the cabin leaving only a hole of light and their leaves glowed in a fall morning where this story begins.
“Hey! Over here Ashley!”. Ashley was a new girl at her school, P.S.67.
“Thanks for the seat even though there were a lot to chose from.” Ashley said to her best friends, Vanessa and Sharon at lunch. They were the same age as Ashley, they had pleasant conversations that seemed to never and understood her well as a real friend would, unlike the others, for it was the same thing at every school and she never had real friends. “No problem” said Sharon.
´´ Every new girl in town must go to the witch's house, meet the witch, ask for a pumpkin and this pumpkin is not consumable to you, but you are consumable to the pumpkin, raise it and in three weeks of care only from you, the witch will possess the mayor of the town, she makes a contest, you are forced to be in it with the pumpkin that the witch gave you and you also have to do for your family to get money. If you lose, the pumpkin will turn big and eat you.´´ Amber had told them. All of the friends were terrified. ´´It’s okay Sharon it’s going to be fine.´´At this point Sharon was freaked out.
´´Alright, I’ll do it,´´ Ashley said´´She’s right too. My family needs money. Plus we're farmers and they taught me how to take care of plants. But I don’t remember about pumpkins´´Ashley said looking down at the floor.
The next morning...´´ Okay mom, I’m ready to go.´´ Ashley told her mom as they headed out the door. She too was afraid that this would happen of having to go to there and her only daughter there for a while with a witch! ´´It’s going to alright sweetheart just go in geta pumpkin and head out the door.´´.´´Go´´ her mother said as Ashley entered the gate to the witch’s house.
´´Hello? Beautiful witch, are you home? I can come back later when you-´´as Ashley turned to leave, there was a voice ´´Who called me!´´boomed the voice ´´It was me beautiful witch.´´ Ashley said doing a curtsy so that the witch would not be so,mean ´´ Ah, a child that I have never seen before...What do you want?´´´the witch snapped ´´ May I have a pumpkin? To grow and-´´the witch cut her off of her sentence and said ´´Oh yes darling´´ she reached out for a young pumpkin that was ripe´´ Here you go and the contest is in three weeks, so you better take care of that pumpkin.´´she said.
Ashley was so consumed by the contest that she took care of the pumpkin as caring as she could and had nightmares about her family being consumed by the pumpkin, but then her father saved them by opening it’s mouth and that made Ashley feel better and her goal more achiveable.Finally three weeks past and is was the day of the contest...´´ Ashley! You better win!´´ Sharon said to her´´Yeah, you’re putting your life on the line or on a pumpkin´´ Vanessa said secretly laughing. Sharon elbowed her sister´´ Now is not the time to joke Vanessa!´´ . ´´Anyway, that pumpkin looks so ripe I want to consume it.´´Sharon smiled at her ´´I hope that the judges think the same´´ Ashley looked at her pumpkin and for the first time she saw that it was at it’s most ripest stage compared to what she thought of it before.
Everyone presented their pumpkin then it was Ashley’s turn to present her pumpkin. The judges finally made the decision.´´And the winner for this year’s pumpkin contest is, Ashley James! For the most ripest pumpkin!´´ ´´I CONGRATS ASHLEY!´´Vanessa yelled.
After a celebration, Ashley went to bed and drifted to sleep she dreamed about the witch and she said´´Good job on the pumpkin, couldn't have done better myself, mind selling them to me raised only by you?´´ said the witch.´´Of course. Goodnight ´´ Ashley said in her dream. From that day on her family was wealthy but stayed in the cabin.
A Grand Pumpkin
ReplyDeleteThe pumpkin probably thinks that the little person in his mouth is consumable.I don't really think the pumpkin is envious because he could just eat about everything that comes in his way.If the pumpkins goal is to eat people well he's achieving his dream.I bet that the person about to get eaten feels meek.
It looks like the human is applying a lot of strength.He is considering what's going to happen if he stops applying strength.He realizes whats at stake.
This is a really overt place to be,no way you could miss an enormous pumpkin out on the streets.
Nice Marvin!!
DeleteThis doesn't look like a story
DeleteThis is a good story, but maybe add some past events in the story, like how the small person got into his mouth, and try to make it a bit longer next time.
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The night before halloween, there was a man in his shack. He felt enviable that his neighbor has a mansion. And so he felt grumpy his whole life.
ReplyDelete“Man I wish I had a mansion” Said the old man
Then suddenly there was a knock on the door. The old man got up and open the door saw no one at the door and slammed the door close.
“GRRRR I HATE PRANKSTERS” YELLED THE MAN
Before he could have sat again he heard another banging on the door. He got so furious he grabbed a stick then rushed to the door opened it, saw no one and went outside.
He saw a weird creature with a big head and was very short and started to chase it.
The creature quickly reacted fast and started running.
“COME HERE YOU BASTARD! “ SCREAMED THE OLD MAN IN A VERY FURIOUS VOICE
All of a sudden the creature took out a gun and shot the man. The gun did not kill the man but shrunk him.
“HAHAHAHA” Cried the Creature
Then the creature started chasing the man. The man started to run in the tall grass so the creature lost where the man went. Quickly the man saw a jack-o-lantern and hid in it. The creature heard a loud noise then left the wood.
It ended up that the old man lived the rest of his life as tiny as a mice.
I love your story!!
DeleteNice use of vocab words and spooky story
DeleteBy tedd
It was October 31st, 3015 , It was a dark and scary haunted night. Daniela was playing truth or dare with her friends with her I phone 38. It was Daniela’s turn. She presses dare and looks at her dare. It was a considerable dare to do, but she wants to achieve it so, Daniela excepted it. She left to the Central Hall and entered the forbidden Grand Pumpkin. Legend says that if you entered it, which no one even dared, you would be haunted for life. Central Hall is a prosperous location in the city of Hakuna Matata. As Daniela enter she wonders if she should do this. But then…
ReplyDeleteShe falls into the lake, as her friends are overt and burst out laughing at her. The whole town stares in disappointment and now know she is haunted for the rest of her life. They stand there looking all meek and clean and ignore. As she stares at a little boy dying of laughter. Lily her, enemy says out loud “I could do better!”. He jumped on top the grand pumpkin and shows how much balance he has. She flips her silky, pantene hair. As, Daniela stands there envious.
Suddenly, the light of the grand pumpkin glows. Then, Lily falls into the great lake and twists her ankle.”Ouch!” says Lily. She calls for her friends, but they had already left her. Daniela spoke to her friends and said “The honest always beats the baddest”. Out of nowhere, the Grand Pumpkin smiles at Daniela. She knows now she is not haunted.
I love it!
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DeleteThe Witchery on Halloween Night
ReplyDeleteOnce upon a time, it was the day of Halloween and they were setting up the grand fright festival. A guy named Brandon was helping set up the festival, he made all the decorations he made a huge enchanting pumpkin as well in the middle of the whole city of Halloween Town it was big enough to consume a full-size person. While Brandon was decorating, he noticed a girl named Maddie staring at the pumpkin he made. Maddie was approachable, so he walked over to her and asked, "do you like it".
She responded in a kind way "yes, I love it, you must be a prosperous artist". But there is a feeling in her stomach that there is something hidden underneath, but she didn't want to make him think that she was crazy. But there was something that no one new, underneath there lived a witch who wanted Halloween town to herself and one man to live with, that was her achievable dream
Brandon responded, "thank you, but I'm not successful at all I am an overt artist that wants to be prosperous". Maddie looked very sad at that moment. Brandon noticed that she looked sad so he asked her "do you want to see my other sculpts for the festival", she looked pleased and went off to look at his other works of art, she envied him.
An hour later, under the huge pumpkin the witch is still there thinking about who to marry and saw Brandon and new they were perfect. So she had a plan to throw a potion at something to suck everything into it and never come out. So she adds all the brewing things together and the splash potion is ready to start sucking people in but scince the festival wasn't ready she had to wait. But then she realized its Halloween she can go out without people noticing that she is a real witch. So she tried to get out but something was stopping her. It was the giant pumpkin so she made another potion of teleportation and got teleported into the pumpkin and hoped out.
Everything looked so spooky and everything was so different. The witch spotted Brandon and Maddie, she was furious she went to her and released the inner witch and she threw the potion at the pumpkin everyone got sucked in the pumpkin and she was fighting Maddie Brandon tried to save her but she was too high for him to reach. Maddie got sucked into the pumpkin and Brandon took the risk to jump into the pumpkin because he was consumable. They were never seen again.
Nice One Nia!
ReplyDeleteThe Enchanted Halloween
ReplyDeleteHerry Chen 6-401
Hi i’m Steven and i’m going to tell you story that happen to me last halloween. The day before halloween something happen to me that never forget I was enchanted and now I’m the size of a ant. I have a little time to get food and somewhere to live not for long I found a house but it was to big all I found was a jack o lantern and there is food and that where I can live for now. Behind the door was a man who can make people turn small was found out that Steven was in his jack o lantern because he have turn Steven to the size of a ant so he tried to fix it and Steven back to normal size. When I finish my small dinner can I say all I can do is to sleep and forget about me in a small size.
When I woke up it was halloween I can’t be late for trick-treat which is at night but now I’m really running out of time all I have is a iron man suit but of course it is a fake one for halloween. when I got out of the jack o lantern I was a little bit of hungry but still I tried to go inside the house a man came out he was taller than me of course be I tried to yell for “help” he can’t hear my voice but then he look at me and said come inside and I’ll help you. So like what he I went inside and this is the most amazing thing I have seen his house was a lab full of potion and even a machine that I don’t know of all I said is “wow this place is amazing” and he said to me “I know this is my lab and sorry that I turn you to a ant” in my mind I said “so it was you that turn me to the size of a ant”. After that he turn me back into my normal size.
When I was back into my normal size it was time for me to trick-treat at the right time for me. Still I was pretty angry at him for turning to the size of a ant!
The Gobling Pumpkin
ReplyDeleteAt the midnight hour on a dark night two boys were walking across a graveyard when they suddenly saw a pumpkin patch. One of the boys said “this was not here before”, the other said “maybe this is new”. So the boys went to the pumpkin patch not knowing it was the worst mistake of their lives. HA HA HA
“This patch is one of the biggest I have ever seen” said one brother. “You're right” said the other, “this is grand”.
As they kept walking and walking the patch was like a never ending maze until they realized they were lost. The pumpkin patch led to a dark forest and unfortunately that was the only way to go.
Suddenly they found a stump in the forest, but it was huge and then the boy's started digging. They saw an orange color and kept digging. The all of a sudden the thing was coming out of the ground and had two huge eyes. The pumping rose out of the ground.
The boys ran as fast as they could but the pumpkin was so big all the trees fell and the boys were trapped. One found an opening in the trees, he told his friend. The both of them rushed through the trees but only one got through. But the other was not so lucky and the pumpkin gobbled one of them up. Now it sits in the forest waiting for its next victim
The mysterious pumpkin
ReplyDeleteThere was a boy named Tyler and a girl named Violet. One day, they were walking through a forest and stumbled upon a small pumpkin. They decided to bring it home and keep it. They had it for over 10 years and the pumpkin was HUGE!! Until one day, Violet decided to climb in and take a look of what's inside. It was a gooey orange liquid with a bunch of seeds inside it. Then the pumpkin ate her! Tyler was so shocked that he also went inside so he could save her but..... he was consumed! The pumpkin said " MMMM.. that tasted sooo good. Who knew that they were consumable?!" They were both trapped for about 4 years. Until one day, she saw something unusual and she tried to climb out but she never achieved her goal. So Tyler decided to give it a try. He made it! Violet just stood there feeling envious. Tyler went home and left Violet there alone for about 5-10 minutes. Then Tyler came back with a rope to help her out. Violet tried so hard..... it didn't work. So the next day, Tyler decided to carve the pumpkin. Violet was so happy that it worked! but the unusual thing that violet saw? Yea that turned out to be a new park that the neighbors built.
- Audrey 6-301
The Giant Pumpkin
ReplyDeleteOne day, a man went to buy a pumpkin for Halloween to make decorations and consumable foods made of pumpkin. He met a old man that was selling them. He was going to buy one, but the man told him about a enchanted pumpkin seed that will grow a bunch of pumpkins in Halloween. The man considers that the old man could be lying, but decides to see if the seeds really grow in Halloween, so he buys some. Later, he plants them.
At Halloween, it did grow a bunch of pumpkin, but on was big and grand. At night, he heard screaming and looked at what was going on, he saw the giant pumpkin was gone. He saw it eating people.He woke up in his bed and thought it was a dream, but someone something crashed into the house. It was the giant pumpkin and it consumed the man.
Was they're anyone that could try to stop the pumpkin? like police or military?
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ReplyDelete4 Kids in a Mysteries Plant
In this mysteries plant there 4 people named Alessandra,Erica,Jasmine and Luigi. They were sitting down all watching t.v, but then they heard this large sound BOOM Alessandra said “what was that’’ that's queer were the only one’s here said Erica “ no the” said Jasmine. “Come on let's go outside” said Luigi.
Then they saw this huge pumpkin Alessandra said “guess i am making a huge pie” Luigi said “ yes yes i am going to stof my face with with pie” Jasmine was confused she didn't think it wasn't a good idea it do anything like make a pie. “Stop said Jasmine everyone just stop. “what happen” said Erica then everyone saw this amazing enchanting women named Ms. Arleqin she said “ who grow this giant pumikin “ great” said luigi “what happen” said Jasmine “now there are 4 girls and i am the only boy” i fell bad for you said this enchanting voice.
“I am they only girl in my house oh and by the way my name is Melissa” “really” “ i was just trying to cheer you up” “why are you even here”? we are here cause in this pumkin there is a srink beam so you cant cut this in half noooooooooooooooo stop Luigi duck what noooooooooooooo he got shot now the pmkin is alive no. now Luigi is stuck in the pumikin.
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it was one night and that is how it all started atom and his friends were watch a movie about the walking dead session 6 and then they heard a struggle voice and they kept on getting closer and closer they were consumed by the voice and they saw a gigantic pumpkin they thought they were day dreaming from all the walking dead episodes they have watched and then they thought that they would want to win they pumpkin contest but they had to figure out what to do with it and the pumpkin said you shall not spare me they did not under stand a word he was saying the pumpkin was trying to bite atom and his friends they were running around in circles then they thought of an idea they said to the pumpkin we will take you home with us and we will use you to win the pumpkin contest then the pumpkin said then you shall spare me masters then they took the pumpkin to the contest and they won the other contestents were envious then everyone lived a happy holloween
"Consider this story true." said the queer old man. "The tale of the great consuming pumpkin eats all who enters its domain, although he has not been revived for over 200 years."
ReplyDeleteAlthough in Butter town, "I have a grand idea Jason!" said sky "What is it, sky?" Jason asked in a weird tone. "Since the squids have been so envious about my butter sword, ill apply a stone handle instead of a wooden one plus they probably going to lure us into the consuming pumpkins domain and summon him, so lets kill it!" Sky said in a happy voice. "Fine" said Jason.
So they lurked into the place only some people can get to, the pumpkins graveyard. "Alright where is this demonic beast?" asked Sky "Probably at the demonic ritual being preformed by the squids that are over the rainbow." replied Jason. "ITS HERE!" said Sky and Jason in a scared tone, as they pulled out their swords Jason was being consumed.
"Jason no!" sky said as Jason was in the mouth of the pumpkin. With a slash of the epic amazing butter sword the pumpkin showed its true form, a queer old man.
P.S/I.S. 102Q Alessandra Cortes
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In the beginning of time before unicorns, dinosaurs, or griffons roamed the earth. There were 5 girls Erica, Julissa, Melissa, Jasmine, and Hazel. They were all genius sisters, but no one could prepare them for what was heading their way. The 5 sisters sat under a cherry tree waiting to see a comet. Each sister had a power that they were not aware of. Julissa says “ I think I see something.’’ Jasmine said “ I think that’s the comet.’’ Erica said “ Why is it orange, and round?’’ Melissa says “ Guys move it’s heading our way.’’ Hazel “ If my calculations are correct, then whatever it is, is going to land a mile away from us.’’
“ Boom.’’ It was a giant pumpkin like the size of a mountain. Pumpkin “ You shall all be my slaves mortals for I am superior.’’ The pumpkin had felt envious of all the girls because he could see all their gifts/abilities. Erica, and her sisters had a lot of machines that they had created for any emergency, including a shrink ray. For some reason the pumpkin had been consuming everything in it’s path including the girls cherry tree.
One by one started uncovering their grand power/ability. Julissa had found her talent, water by going to the beach and controlling the shapes and size with her mind. Erica found hers, fire by trying to make a spark with rocks and instead making a whole fire that Julissa put out. Hazel found her power, wind by meditating and then slowly starting to control the way the wind acts with her mind and hands. Jasmine found her power, freezing things, by holding out her hand and making water automatically freeze. Melissa found hers, earth by trying to plant a sunflower and instead making tons of them like it was nothing.
The last one was convergence. So the pumpkin was about to destroy one of the sisters so they did convergence.So they applied their abilities in order to destroy that pumpkin. Which turned them into one powerful sister. They were still tiny compared to the pumpkin, but still more powerful. They were hoping to achieve their goal in destroying the pumpkin. The sister was in the pumpkin trying to keep its mouth open, but they were struggling as sweat ran down their head and they began to lose strength trying to keep it open and not be devoured or consumed. The …………………………………….won.
That was very creative!!!!!
DeleteSpooky House
ReplyDeleteOnce upon a time there was a girl named Anna and his friend named Jacob. It was a spook dark night on halloween day. Anna, Jacob and a group of friends went to the city and found a horror house named Spooky House. But before they went in, they applied on a sweater because it was cold inside the haunted house. They were trying to achieve their goal by not screaming and they started to walk around. The haunted house was closing, but Jacob was in so when it was closed Jacob was left inside the pumpkin. The pumpkin was the consumption of the boy trying to get out. They were considering to somehow get out of the pumpkin. They realized that the pumpkin was consumable, they ate it and finished it. After the haunted house, they went home at 1 in the morning and took a deep sleep because they had school the next day.
The next day when they had school they had to write a summary about what they did in halloween day and describe what it looked like. Jacob wrote, “When we went in, the haunted house was shaped like a pumpkin.”. While Anna wrote, “The haunted house that was shaped like a pumpkin was grand.”.
Some students didn’t get to go because their teacher told their parents that they had to do a project that they didn’t finish on halloween day. The students who didn’t get to go felt envious.
P.S./I.S.102Q Esmeralda Jerez
ReplyDelete6-311 10/10/15
The Day Of When You Die
Once upon a time there was a grand pumpkin who lived in a meek pumpkin patch near a farm. Any one who got near the pumpkin he ate them.
Then one day a man named Peter took his kids, Annie and Steven, to the queer pumpkin patch so they can pick out a pumpkin to cut out faces for halloween. When they got there,they found out that there was nobody, but there were many assorted pumpkins.So they went on looking for perfect pumpkin’s.While Annie and Steven were looking for a pumpkin,Peter spotted a dazzling light coming from the back of the farm.
“WOW! I’ll be right back kids,keep looking for a pumpkin”peter said.
“o.k daddy”.Replied the kids.
While the kids were looking for a pumpkin,Peter went to go check out the light.When he got there he discovered a grand pumpkin with a lantern that dazzled the inside and outside of the pumpkin.
“OMG!Look at this huge pumpkin!” Peter yelled.
Suddenly the pumpkin opened his mouth and tried to eat Peter in a gobble.
“Ahhhhhh! HELP! HELP! HELP!”Peter screamed.
“Do you hear that,it’s DAD! COME ON WE GOT TO GO HELP HIM”The kids ran to go help.When they got there the pumpkin tried to eat the kids,but the kids ran for their lives.
Now Peter was alone nobody around to help him.He applied his fighting skills that he knew, but the pumpkin was stronger eventually this did not end very prosperous,Peter was weak now and the pumpkin was strong,so the pumpkin took a big gobble and killed Peter.
Nightmare of the Legendary Pumpkin
ReplyDeleteBrandon Bosch 6-401
Mr. Patterson was in a very bad mood once he entered his lab with his students. The students always laughed because his initials were “P.P”, Peter Patterson. He wasn’t one of the nicest teachers in the planet. His classroom was full of items any other science teacher would have. Chemicals, beakers, pendulums, lots of nerdy stuff.
“Mr. Patterson?”, said Paula, “Are you alright?”.
“I’m fine”, said Mr. Patterson. “I tried to do this experiment, but it’s just, you know, was too large, my house is messed up, so dirty. For some reason it always seems as if my house was moving, now it’s orange”.
Now the whole entire is staring at Mr. Patterson as if he was talking like some two-year old would say when looking at a orange. What he said wasn’t very consumable.
“It is considerable to buy a new house” said Maggie.
“I can’t” said Mr. Patterson. “With all the bills, it’s just impossible. All i need is some cleaning and then it would be good as new.” said very sadly.
“I’m sure me, Paula, and Maggie would come to your house today and clean up, right after dinner” said Nia happily.
“These are the reasons why you guys are one of my favorite students, I’ll just leave the keys at my desk, and you can pick it up at dismissal. ” said Mr. Patterson.
“We get that a lot” said the three of them.
It’s seven o’clock, very windy. It seems as if it’s a very spooky neighborhood. They finally reach Mr. Patterson’s house.
“Would you look at that” said Maggie, “It is moving” “And it’s orange” said Nia.
“ C’mon guys, there’s nothing to be afraid of ” said Paula bravely.
“I’m not sure about this” said Nia
“Yeah! we’re going home” said Maggie, as they both sprint back home.
“Chickens!” screamed Paula as if they were a mile away. Paula entered the house” “AHHHH!!” Paula screamed as loud as a crying baby. “It’s a pumpkin” she says. She runs for her life and goes to a cave. The grand pumpkin follows her. She then gets swallowed by the pumpkin. She screams but then finds out it was all a nightmare.
The Grand Pumpkin For Dinner? by Janine Arias
ReplyDeleteIt was the year 1990, October 31st. One night, there was a young man named Ellington Egan, and his father, Alfonzo Egan. They were hunting for food for their family. It was pitch black, you can barely see in the darkness . Later, on Their grand journey, Ellington found a grand pumpkin. It also had a glowing face with big eyes and huge teeth. He thought I`d be considerable to climb the pumpkin.
Ellington toiled to climb the giant pumpkin. Trying hard to reach the pumpkin’s teeth. His father told him “BE CAREFUL SON!”.
As soon as Ellington reached the pumpkin’s teeth, he looked inside and was dazzled by the bright lit candle. He went inside, down to the bottom of the pumpkin.
Ellington poked his knife through the pumpkin’s skin and started cutting it. He toiled to cut the pumpkin. Ellington cut out a huge square so he could go out. “Let’s cut the pumpkin son.” said Alfonzo.
After they cut the grand pumpkin, they put it in their wagon and went back home.
I know it's not that good.
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DeleteCreepy Night of the Jack-o-Lantern terror...
ReplyDeleteIn the year 1999 the night before Halloween there were evil and spooky ghost roaming around the town.One of the kid in Jack class made a huge Jack-o-Lantern bragging to his friends and class mates "oh look at this u cant make one ha" Kids were getting ready for trick or treating.
Jack was so Envious that he said to himself "I CAN DO BETTER THAN THAT" so he went and bought all the items he needed to create the world's largest moving Jack-o-lantern he has to apply his test before he starts the whole experiment .He said to himself
“so how should i start this experiment he considered to himself about maybe bringing a friend to his house to help him. He went to his friends Jason’s house “do you wanna come over and help me for a spooky halloween experiment. Jason said “ok “
and Jack closed all the light and put up 3 candles he started to do the experiment he got a Jack-o-lantern and started mixing liquid together that had chemical inside and one of his potion was named the Giant potion which made anything larger and another Potion is the life potion that makes anything come to life. He poured it inside and Jason ask “Is it dangerous i’m scared will it attack the whole town” Jack said “relax you think too much” when Jack poured the potion inside of the jack-o-lantern nothing happened “what?” “why is it not working.The wind started to blow and howl.
Then a second later the pumpkin started Growing larger and larger Yeah I achieved my goal” when it started chasing after Them and it had destroyed the town Jack was stuck inside the mouth of the Jack-O-Lantern the Jack-O-Lantern eyes shivered with evil that scared the kids in his class were laughing “hahahahahaha.” The Jack-o-Lantern kept biting harder and harder until a great old wise wizard made a potion by hand and said some words and threw a potion at the jack-o-lantern and the jack-o-lantern grew back to its normal size Jack was saved and the wizard said Never to try it again and disappeared with a whoosh”That was close” said Jack “Now who thinks too much” But Jack had not pumpkin lurking at his window and followed him inside his house…
nice dialoge in your story
DeleteThe Killer Pumpkin
ReplyDeleteA evil scientist named Dr.Elliot he was a wanted cereal killer in 30 states.But one Halloween night he was working on a killer pumpkin with his partner Inferno."Now apply the dark matter into the android";said Dr.Elliot.So Inferno did what he said,but then Dr.Elliot throw a knife into Inferno neck."Why are you doing this";cried Inferno."During the past 2 years you have working for me you have learned how to control matter and I have not, at first i was so envious of your power level but now i found a way to drain your power into me";yelled Dr.Elliot."But I consider you my brother";said Inferno. Then Elliot crushed Inferno head into dust.
The next day he drained Inferno's grand power in to his own body."Yes i can fell the power";said Dr.Elliot.
Then he went into his pumpkin android."The day has now come for me to achieve my goal"shouted Dr.Elliot.He goal was to kill all of the people of plant Earth."To the city of New York";said Elliot.
On 10/31/16 he stroke the city of New York."Ooh noooooo";said a civilian.The android grabbed millions of people then took a gold sword a cut throw their necks.There was blood all over the city.This would take million of dollars to fix.Then the city sent in the military.There were tanks,fighter jets,and missile loaded trucks.They took the android down and Dr.Elliot was charged with 1st degree murder.Now he will spent life in prison were he shall be exiled.
The man is hallucinating and is being consumed by his fears. John’s biggest fear is Pumpkins and in front of him is this huge and grand pumpkin. A pumpkin with teeth of marshmallow, and raging orange eye‘s, which are petrifying and creepy. The pumpkin kept coming closer and closer until the pumpkin swallowed John and fell into his mouth.
ReplyDeleteWhile John was falling into down the pumpkins center, he noticed there were creatures inside of the pumpkin were creatures made of candy corn and chocolate were roaming the area. John also noticed there was a bed of marshmallow along with a gummy bear monster along with a black lickerish horse. Once John had landed on the bed of marshmallow the sugary had starred at John for a while. After that came a twizzler bull and every sugary monster ran for their lives and so did John. So John ran for his life, trying to avoid being seen by the huge candy beast.
John was still running away from the twizzler bull, gasping for air John finally found a place to hide from the bull. And after that John had found a plant axe and figured he can use that to break his way out of the pumpkin. When he broke through the pumpkin he woke up and was no longer hallucinating.
The Pumkin Accident
ReplyDeleteIn the scientist lab the scientist told Max “You first need to apply this tan to make yourself grow bigger.” Max was very envious that his friends had segways, so when he saw this ad to do the experiment, he considered the stakes and then joined. “Now all you have to do is wait here while I start the machine” said the man, “this will be so grand.” he then went into a room. The machine started glowing and glowing and Max started to think what he would achieve from this when suddenly bang.
He looked and saw everything was bigger and then realized that he was tiny, he was suprised and was a little afraid. The scientist came back, “oh no, there has been an accident, it has made you small, I will try and find a way to cure you.” and hurried off. Max looked around and saw a giant pumkin on the other side of the room, he decided to eat it to calm himself down and hopped on its teeth and started to consume it.
He was busy eating the pumkin when the scientist came back with a strange machine, “it will help you grow” and aimed it at him. The problem was, Max was in the pumkin so when the man shot, it hit the pumkin and it grew and grew and broke out of the house. Everyone saw it and talked about it and then 2 people were on the news around the world. Now there is a giant pumkin and the scientist and Max are famous. Now Max buys the segway and is the coolest kid ever.
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ReplyDeleteThe pumpkin garden-
ReplyDeleteBy Langening Ratmansunu, Class 6-301
One dark, eerie Halloween night, a man was out gardening his pumpkins. He had applied so much care, as they were very special to him. It was said that on this very night, one person would be brought to the pumpkin garden, and there their fate would be decided. Either they would be eaten by the great pumpkin king, or be spared. Everyone believed it, but him, of course. “Hah, how do they even believe that story? It’s for kids.” He thought, looking at the empty streets.
When he fell asleep, he woke up in a pumpkin patch, filled with giant pumpkins, ten times his height. He stared at amazement at the height. They were so grand, so enviable. “Who planted these pumpkins, better than mine?!” He said, looking around, green with envy. Seeing that no one was there, an idea formed in his head. “If I can steal these pumpkins, I’ll win the pumpkin contest coming up! I think this will be achievable.” He thought, rubbing his hands together in a sinister manner. He searched around for an exit. “Aha!” He said, gleefully. He found the nearest pumpkin and started applying as much force as possible, trying to roll it toward the exit. Unfortunately, he had failed. “Great. Now I’ll never win the pumpkin competition!” He yelled.
Suddenly, the biggest of the pumpkins started coming to life. “WHO DARES TO DISTURB MY PEACEFUL SLUMBER?!” It boomed, considering the human as a consumable, delicious meal. The man froze, startled. The pumpkin started hopping towards him. and grabbed him in his jaws. The man struggled, trying to keep its jaw open to keep himself from getting crushed,and when he kept it open large enough, he fled. He dashed out the exit, the pumpkin creature yelling in frustration. “I’LL GET YOU HUMAN!” It yelled, furious.
The man woke up. “Phew, it was just a dream.” He said, relieved. But, he didn’t notice his pumpkins outside the window, with gleaming red eyes and sharp teeth.
So creative and good descriptive details.
DeleteThe Pumpkin Cave by: Kanastasya Adi
ReplyDeleteCaleb jumped out of bed at the middle at the nigh (1:23). It was dark so Caleb didn't see where he was going. "OWWW, what was that", cried Caleb. His forehead was throbbing when he hit a mysterious Pumpkin Cave. Caleb saw a bit of light in the Pumpkin Cave. Caleb was dazzled by the light. Caleb went inside and it looked so fanciful. "I consider this to have some comic posters... and LESS light!", screamed Caleb. The Pumpkin Cave's mouth closed, lights off! "Hey, what's going on!!!!!!", screamed Caleb, Caleb tried running but the mouth was closed. Caleb started pacing. The lights turned on just the way Caleb wanted it to be, comic posters ALL OVER the place. "OH YEAH, now we're talkin'', then a bed popped up. "I want you to stay here for the night", said the Pumpkin Cave. Caleb jumped right in the bed. And so he stayed for the night.
P.S./I.S.102Q Aaron Custodio
ReplyDeleteClass 6-311 11/11/15
Dave’s way to Celebrate Halloween
In a grand hallow’s eve, three boys, Dave, Bob, and Carlos were conducting an experiment to scare off trick or treaters walking by their lab to prove that they are the scariest people of all of California. These three boys decide to use a small pumpkin to be part of their experiment. They plan to make the small pumpkin to grow large enough so the three of them could hid inside it, then scaring any trick or treaters that walk by their pumpkin. They try to make a potion that would transform the small pumpkin to a 8 feet tall pumpkin.
When Bob finishes making the potion, he tells Carlos to apply it to the pumpkin. Suddenly, Dave secretly scares Bob while entering the room, distracting Carlos who applies more than he needed to, to the pumpkin.” WHAT HAVE YOU DONE”!! said Bob who was ready to run out of the room. They quickly ran outside wondering what was going to happen to the pumpkin. Everything was meek for a few minutes until Dave sneezed as loud as a thunderstorm making the ground shift as if it were an earthquake. Then there stood a queer enormous pumpkin as tall as 5 stories tall of a building looking at them in a puzzled face. “Oh Uhhhh”!!!! Carlos said.
“WHY HAVE YOU AWOKEN ME FROM MY ETERNAL NAP”!!! the pumpkin yelled. We come in peace Bob said making the pumpkin think not to frighten them. You all crossed the line with me and showed me that you shall work for me for eternity for what you have done the pumpkin said. Then without a second wasted, the pumpkin came down with his mouth open wanting to trap us inside of him. “Wait” Dave said. “Have me instead rather than my friends since I’m the one who started this mess”Dave kept saying. The pumpkin got Dave with his mouth and swallowed him to his stomach. Then Dave attempted to get out wrestling the pumpkin until Carlos and Bob started to take out the pumpkin’s organs getting the pumpkin to shrink to its normal size again. This became one of the most queer stories of Halloween ever mentioned in the news.
Sebastian and the pumpkin
ReplyDeleteOn Halloween night a guy name Sebastian went into the woods. He taught he could be brave going into the woods but he was consumed by fear. As deeper he went the darkness grew bigger. He consider turned around but he got lost. He was not able to see which way he could go. The darkness and the sound of the animals made the night more creepy. He taught about his house and family and the Halloween party that was happening in his house. He said why did I have to listen to my friends and take the bet to go inside the forest. He felt envious because his friends were having fun and he was lost in the forest. All of the sudden he saw a very tiny light deep in the forest. He walked toward the light, the closer he got to it the light grow bigger and bigger. To his surprised it was a huge grand pumpkin. He was shock but he did not felt scared. He went closer and closer and he saw a tiny man inside the pumpkin. The tiny man asked him to come in Sebastian went inside. He said to him "welcome to my humbled house". Is been a long time that I don't have any visitors to my house. Do you like some pumpkin pie?. Sebastian was hungry like a wolf and he accepted the pumpkin pie. The tiny man asked Sebastian what he was doing in the forest alone and so late He told him that he made a bet with his friends that he could go inside the forest in the night of Halloween. And he said Why Halloween and Sebastian answered because Halloween is a spooky night. But a can feel in your heart that you are not scared?. Sebastian said I was but for some reason I am not afraid any more. Ohh I can see that you have conquer your fears. All of the sudden Sebastian hear people calling his name and lights all around the forest. He looked toward the tiny man and the big pumpkin but to his surprised the pumpkin and the tiny men have disappeared. He only found a tiny seed under his feet.
Jasmine Gonzalez
ReplyDelete6-311 Little Drake Big Pumpkin
Drake went trick or Treating and he went to all the houses except one.. It looked really queer it looked like a witch's hut. Drake went to the house and got his candy and went back home. While he was going home he looked in his pumpkin and saw a strange looking candy it had a wrapper but it had no name.
“I’m going to eat this candy first when I get home” Drake said
Drake got home and was two steps up the stairs till his mom said
“Drake honey is that you come down and eat.”
Drake went down and ate his delicious food his mom made.
“Thanks mom for the food well I’m going to eat some candy.” he said with excitement.
He went upstairs and achieved his goal of eating the strange candy. After he ate it he went to bed.
The next morning Drake woke up and felt his bed got bigger and everything else around him too.
“OMG have I shrunk or did everything get bigger?”. questioned Drake
Drake’s mom walked in his room and saw that he wasn’t there she looked everywhere for him she couldn’t find him. Then Drake pulled mom’s pants to get attention and he did.
“Honey is you that you what happened.”she said
“Yeah mom please help me.” Drake said
Drake’s mom picked him up and did everything to try to get him big again.
“I’m sorry honey I have to work I’m really sorry”.
“Okay mom bye.”
When Drake said bye he remembered that he ate that candy last and thought that, that candy was the reason he shrunk and it was so he went to the house where they gave him that candy and tried to hit the doorbell but he couldn’t. Then he found a long stick and got to hit the doorbell.
“Hello who is it who knocked”. said a women that had a long nose and a witch hat on and also had a mole on her face.
“Down here”. Drake said
“Oh dear did I do this I think I did cause no one else can shrink people or things.’’
“I also think you did this I came here last night to get some candy and you gave me a strange candy and I ate last night’’.
“I must have accidently dropped it in, the candy was for my bird I kind of made big, wait what time did you eat the candy.’’
“Around 8:00 why.”
‘’Well this candy can make small forever you can big again if you bring me a tooth of the talking pumpkin it leaves in the front of the forest but you only have till 8:00”.
“Okay thank you”.
Drake went along and went toward the forest but first he had to pass a river and since he was tiny he couldn’t win the water he was weaker than the river but a log is stronger he saw a log and walked over it.
“Wow at least I passed it.”
But the danger wasn’t done he had to pass long tall grass and who knows what’s hiding in the grass. So he thought then he said
“Maybe I can make stilts with sticks.”
And he did he passed the danger and got to the pumpkin he saw the pumpkin and it said
“Hello there what would you like wait you are tiny and let me guess you want my tooth.”
“Yes how did you know has this happened before’’.
“Yes go ahead take my tooth plus I’m going to die in a few days and a new talking pumpkin is going to grow here so who cares.’’
“Okay thank you.’’
Drake went inside the pumpkin’s mouth and found a way to take the tooth out and he did it.It was 7:48 and he had to take it to the omen and he ran really fast and made it by 7:52.
“Oh good job now to make the potion.’’
The witch made it and Drake drank it before 8:00 and was back to normal.
IS THAT A PUMPKIN?!?! (By:Nathaniel Cantor)
ReplyDeleteOne day at around 9:10 the Blakes worked very hard to create and grow a massive pumpkin. The kids Tolier and Josie in their family went to the store to get some materials for the family so they would be able to carve it out. The parents said that it was acceptable to buy big knives and big shovel.
“How are we going get all of the stuff we got home” yelled Josie from a far distance
, “I do not know how but we need to” yelled Tolier. Tolier finds an available abandoned cart and uses it to put everything inside it.
When Tolier and Josie get back home they start to scoop out the guts of the pumpkin so they can be able to carve it into a scary looking pumpkin. They want to it to look like it was going to consume a whole shed in one huge bite. 1 hour and 18 minutes later they were so tired to do anything else but they finished it. They were so proud and all of their friends were very envious. Overall the kids had a part with their friends and families for a long time having a turn to go inside the Giant pumpkin that took forever to build
November 11, 2015 at 3:24 PM
Experiment Gone Wrong by: Maggie Chen
ReplyDeleteIt all started on the night of Halloween. Nia, Paula, Brandon, and I were lurking around the streets hiding from a jackal lantern that Ivan toiled on an experiment. He tried to make his small pumpkin a little bit bigger and to have a face carved on it.
“YES!!! It’s finally done. Now I can show my friends.” said Ivan as he ran down the street trying to find us.
But Ivan made a mistake in the equation and messed up the experiment. The pumpkin started to evolve into an evil grand giant faced pumpkin named Jake who wanted to kill all of us. It was very overt when he tried to sneak up on us, so Jake created a plan to sneak up in us and eat of all us up. Jake thought his plan will be very prosperous. But we were behind him because it was very hard to see us.
“What kind of plan is that? It’s so predictable and so queer.” We whispered to each other while the pumpkin was trying to find us.
But we didn’t really care since Jake has his own manner of doing things. So we didn’t care about it and started to create a plan to get rid of him once and for all. We were thinking about applying our karate skills were learned to the plan we created.
“Guys!!! Can you kill Jake can we make Jake into a giant pumpkin pie?” Ivan started whispering while we were planning our scheme.
“No!!!!!!!!!!!!!!” We screamed at Ivan, but we were too loud.
Jake heard us and now he is chasing us down the street and Jake caught up to us really easily because he was hoping. Also he made the ground shake so much that we kept on falling while we were running away to a safe place to figure out our plan. But it was too late because Ivan and Paula has already been eaten by the pumpkin. Now it is only Nia, Brandon, and I left. We didn’t know what the plan was, so we just sprang into action and started to kick the pumpkin’s butt.
“Take that and that!!!” We were yelling when we were kicking its butt.
The pumpkin finally fell apart since we kicked it so many times that there were so many holes. Now we had to get Paula and Ivan out of the pumpkin. After we got them out, we all smelled like pumpkin guts.
“That was awesome! Can we do that again?” asked Ivan as he came out of Jake.
“NO NEVER AGAIN,” we all yelled at him, “You are never doing any experiments unless you get our approval.”
So Ivan didn’t do experiments before getting out permission. We were glad that he didn’t go doing experiments that we didn’t know about or else we would be in big trouble.
I love how included your friends!!
DeleteWhat's Happening???
ReplyDeleteOnce upon a time there was this man named Henry who went to an abandon baker and was too foolish to realize of what he was doing. On that afternoon around 2 o'clock he took a look at all the wonderful cupcakes that was minimized by a potion so, he decided to eat a whole batch. The next hour he realized that he ate so many cupcakes and he shrink . The next day was Halloween on October 31,1965 he decided that he should have some quality time by himself. So he decided to explore the woods.
''Why is it so dark?'' he thought to himself.
Then out of no where he saw this gigantic neon lighted orange pumpkin and he wanted to enter inside the pumpkin. Henry thought he was applicable to turn off the pumpkin at midnight. Henry thought he was achievable to complete this job and he was correct. Three seconds after Henry pulled out the outlet that was connected to the pumpkin he was a normal human being and he wasn't stuck to the pumpkin anymore.
The next morning he was consumable about the abandoned baker and he never went anymore. and wasn't a foolish Henry anymore.
By: Jeslyn Masli 6-401
P.S./I.S.102Q Jaclyn Mainassy
ReplyDelete6-401 11/10/15
Vocab Story
In the morning of Halloween I went to school. Walking into school I noticed my two best friends Henry and Olivia. When walking with my best friends I see Francesca. As I walk past her I’m feeling envious. She has popularity and she’s rich. Meanwhile, my life is just one boring story. School already ended and as I walk out I was goofing around and fell. Francesca laughed at me along with her friends. I felt so embarrassed.I started to run away. Jordan!! said Olivia and Henry. I heard them but I just kept on running somewhere that wasn’t high school. I opened the door to my house. I walk in and a tear came down my face but as usual my two best friends are there beside making me feel better. To forget that horrible event I went to hang with my two best friends or as I call them my brother and my sister. Me and my friends were walking to the haunted house. It was really scary it made me forget what happened. There was this grand pumpkin. It was so big it wasn’t consumable. Olivia asked “Should we consider to go in the big pumpkin?” “Yea why not” said both myself and Henry. We were going up one by one and Henry almost fell in. While I was waiting I decided to apply more lipstick. I couldn’t achieve my goal, I couldn’t get Francesca to like me. The thought of her not liking me consumed me. I’m just glad that I got my friends. We all sat on the mouth in the jack-o-lantern or pumpkin together like we’ve known each other our whole lives.
Minn: Tails of sans and papyrus adventure
ReplyDelete"under tale made up book series :)"
once upon a day it was Halloween and its frisky b-day and sans wakes up for papyrus so he check on him, but he wasn't there but he smelled something in the kitchen he checked and papyrus was there and pap said "WHY HELLO MY BROTHER WOULD YOU LIKE SPAGHETTI TO EAT" sans was surprise, but he forgot to decorate the house for frisk " yo papyrus i need your help to decorate our house for Frisk b-day so are you in or not", he went silent and whispers (well not really) "YES MY DEAR BROTHER I WILL BECAUSE I AM THE GREAT- sans stopped him "yea yea yea we don't have that much time let's go" so they ran to the store to the store buy decoration but when they were about to leave papyrus found a pumpkin carved as almost the same face as frisk "hey papyrus come on we have to go ",so papyrus took it and hid the pumpkin in the bag. so they got home set every thing up but the last bag had the pumpkin so papyrus showed sans "HEY SANS I FOUND THIS PUMPKIN IN THE STREET" but when sans turned around he was shocked "papyrus Dr-drop the p-pumpkin NOW " papyrus was confused "WHY ITS PERFECTLY FINE-" the door open frisk was there, papyrus dropped it and the pumpkin now it's free.
The pumpkin became alive "aha i'm free" the pumpkin ran and jumped out of the window sans and papyrus was shocked " WHAT IS GOING ON SANS" sans was consuming idea to get that pumpkin "UH SANS YOU MIGHT WANNA SEE THIS" sans looked the pumpkin was consuming the citizens, and grow more and more until he achieve to rule the earth, papyrus was freaking out while sans getting idea until he figured it out so sans went out there when he was about to go in it papyrus went crazy and punched the pumpkin in the face while sans was looking at papyrus and said " hey pap how are u doing" he replied back " I HAVE NO IDEA WHAT AM I DOING AND SPAGHETTI THROW" so sans went bag in his house and grabbed a bucket of water then he went into the pumpkin mouth "hey stop throwing spaghetti at my face " papyrus said "NEVER" while sans found the source that was the fire so he throw the water at it source, the pumpkin was felt something broke and he collapsed into pieces .then the people were free from the pumpkin and sans, and everyone was cheering for sans and papyrus when some people were envious so frisk walked up to him and said thank you for my birthday party and everything is back to normal but it was a queer day how it happen. P.S GET DUNKED ON
whose story is this??
DeleteJuan is trying to fight the pumpkin but the pumpkin is moveing his teeth to eat Juan but juan wont let him juan knock out one teeth . The pumpkin considerble to move his tounge to make juan fall in but then juan firend luisthe pumkins help him by putting a baum inside the pumpkin mouth then the pumpkin explloed.
ReplyDeletenice story but next time work on spelling.
Deletehttps://docs.google.com/document/d/1nMAHhVvtSG6NH5PWUlWV7wp10-UWB36tMD8f49Eb56Q/edit?usp=sharing
ReplyDeleteit puts a link when I paste it here
I also shared it with you Ms.Arlequin on google drive
DeleteIt was a quiet night when me and my friend Gary were putting up decorations for his
ReplyDeletehouse. Before the decorations were put up... Gary made a big mistake, He went to a place with pumpkins and the sign says "WARNING! DO NOT TAKE ANY PUMPKINS!", Gary didn't notice the sign and took one of the pumpkins for decorations....
"Gary, did you see that?", I asked. "See what?", Gary replied. "Umm... never mind maybe I just didn't get enough sleep". "Well anyway, the decorations are looking great so far!", said Gary. "Yeah! well...this did cost about a grand you know so that's probably why it looks that good". The pumpkin in the corner looked really suspicious..."Gary! I swear I just saw that changed it's face to a scary one!", I yelled. "You definitely need more sleep...with all my senses I didn't feel anything from it", replied Gary. "Gary! watch out!".
The scary pumpkin gobbled up Gary while I was so frightened that I couldn't even move.... I ran as fast as I could that I think I broke the world record for running the fastest. Thankfully I made it out alive. "Gary...! oh no..." I yelled. I ran back home and took a deep breath as I thought deeply on Gary's death. "*Sigh*". I was so exhausted that I tried to fall asleep but thoughts kept on that scary and horrible moment....
-Jason Jiang 6-401
DeleteTedd Saibuddhabun
ReplyDeleteThe Grand and Spooky Pumpkin of Mystery
In a forest in Camelot there was a man named king Arthur but he wasn't a hero. He pulled Excalibur but wanted to kill a man named Merlin. In a place he entered and robbed his friend of his friend Lancelot and put him in a dungeon.
Later that day he was given a surprise visit from Merlin. Said to go to a journey to find the other half of Excalibur he must find a giant pumpkin were a man hides the other half of Excalibur. He went on the quest immediately. Hut he didn't apply his knowledge to his brain. Such thing couldn't be grand as that. After finding it Arthur raised his sword and said" WHERE IS THE OTHER HALF OF EXCALIBUR!" The man said "What are you talking about." Arthur was so close to achieving his goals. How could I have been foolish enough to consider that Merlin would let me straight to my goal. His thoughts had consumed him so much that the pumpkin was actually alive and ate King Arthur and he was never seen again.
ReplyDeleteOne day a guy named David and he was consuming a bereto from chipola and then antman just ran to him and screamed sudinybop and then David turned small and then he had to live a day like that and then it was fun at first and then it was just scary cose people were so grand but the food could last David for so long it is not even funny and he saw papyrus and sans throwing spaghetti at a pumpkin patch and for him it was very funny.
David was at the park and it was nighttime and a guy is walking to a tree and puts down a pumpkin and it had a face on it and he ran as fast as he could but David still went over there and then the pumpkin became alive and said “I WILL EAT YOU AND EVERYONE” so the pumpkin jumped and ate him.p.s or did he
this is frankie
DeleteThe Giant Scary Pumpkin
ReplyDeleteOne day Gingka was walking home on a Halloween day and a covert giant creepy pumpkin comes out and gobbles him up while Gingka is trying to get out the pumpkin tells him I brought you here because my tooth hurts so I want you to fix it.
Later he considers what will happen to him inside the pumpkin fixing his tooth because the pumpkin was just a little tiny pumpkin and people felt envious of him and gave him food each time until one day he got a cavity and his tooth hurt very much, while his tooth was hurting he went searching for Gingka for help. Gingka helps him and the pumpkin uses telepathy to tell him thank you.
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ReplyDeleteOne day on Halloween night, Jeff and his friend David went trick or treaing. They eventually found a house that had lots of pretty lights.
"Let's go trick or treating here, they look like they have a lot of candy to give us!" David exclaimed
The front door was blocked so they decided to go to the back. They eventually found the source of all the lights. It was a giant pumkin.
"Woah, who would take the time to do all of this?" Jeff said
They went to the door and said
"TICK OR TREAT!"
No one answered. Jeff thought he saw the pumkin moved but just ignored it. They heard
"HELP!" someone mumbled
They found the source coming from the giant pumkin.
"You shall sacrafice one more of your kind to me!" The pumkin exclaimed
"Why?" They questioned
"Because if you dont, I will eat your friends and your loved ones!" The pumkin shouted
They thought and argued a bit and came to a conclusion of Jeff being the sacrifice. David pushed him into the pumkin and said
"sorry Jeff"
From that day on David didnt remember anything. Everything was normal but no one remembered Jeff. He haunts the streets of the neighborhood everyday to look for David for his revenge.
ReplyDeleteOne day a guy named David and he was consuming a bereto from chipola and then antman just ran to him and screamed sudinybop and then David turned small and then he had to live a day like that and then it was fun at first and then it was just scary cose people were so grand but the food could last David for so long it is not even funny and he saw papyrus and sans throwing spaghetti at a pumpkin patch and for him it was very funny.
David was at the park and it was nighttime and a guy is walking to a tree and puts down a pumpkin and it had a face on it and he ran as fast as he could but David still went over there and then the pumpkin became alive and said “I WILL EAT YOU AND EVERYONE” so the pumpkin jumped and ate him.p.s or did he
Anno has heard the same story over and over again. If you turn 13, don't trick or treat or else the bad pumpkin named Kunshu will strike, capturing kids. But when he was 13 he didn't trick or treat. But instead he has been training for years to defeat this scary monster.
ReplyDeleteBut the stories alone didn't have the necessary information needed for Anno to defeat this mighty beast. He died gruesomely, and to this day, the village of Terror has a greive
reminder.
Nice post! Appreciate your idea. Thanks for sharing.
ReplyDeleteI like this topic, thanks for sharing guys.
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